aw i love your story...love love love it...wow just wanted to say that again...hope you write your own book soon!

a faithful reader who loves this story too much,

obsessivepottercullendisorder

Oh, I totally agree with you. And your very powerful words made me think of the flaws in the book. I definitely hoped to have read more of the epilogue, but there was barely anything there! I mean, she gives us this super thick novel, not to mention 6 other ones, and only gives us an epilogue of a few pages. I felt like that was a fanfiction, because it lacked so much information we needed. I was particularly fond of Luna, and was devastated when there was nothing about her! Nor did she mention anything else about Neville, aside from the fact that he became a teacher. And Draco... I loved that guy! He had so much character in him that she could've developed. It was like a small role that could've blossomed into a rather large role... It's such a big shame! I feel sorry for all those Draco fans out there, including myself.
I would've loved to find out Harry and Ginny's jobs, not to mention Hermione and Ron's. Who did the other Weasleys get together with? Stupid, nagging, unanswered questions... And you are SO right about it being very cheesy. I think that the most cheesy part was at the end, where the it said something about Harry's scar not hurting for 19 years. (sorry, don't have the book handy right now, but if you check it, it was very, very cheesy)
And yes, it's so sad that Fred died.. I couldn't believe it when I read it... But I still wish that she had chosen someone else to die. And Remus and Tonks, I don't think that they should've died that soon, it was very upsetting. And the BOTH of them? sigh*
Anyways, I just have to say that I enjoyed this story very much. I've actually never been THIS addicted to a fanfic, so consider yourself lucky, lol :P I'm afraid that I just totally ruined the ending for myself, but oh well, I don't regret it, it was too good to keep on hold. Though I'm still curious to see what happened when Luci went home... :) I also cannot believe how well the two fit together. I mean, since I had read both stories, it feels like as though you wrote them at the same time, sentence by sentence... I love the way how the mystery unravels itself at the end. I enjoy stories that do that.
I'm pleased to say that this story will be at the top of my mental favourites list, and hopefully will always stay there.
Oh, and I can't decide which one I like better. Harry's or Luci's... they're both too good. Are you sure that you didn't just find the story on the ground and post it up on ? :D I'm keeping updated to you, and am hoping for more stories to come.

P.S. Did you know that they were going to split the 7th movie into two? I still can't decide whether this is good or bad news...

Your biggest fan,
Hadiya (AmatuerAuthor)

Oh, so much explained. It all fit together so well, that I think if there was an alternate ending to the HP series, this would have bbeen it. Wow... your chapters always leave me breathless.

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!
WOW.. seriously.. WHERE do you come up with al this stuff?
Sigh* I'm afraid that I'm ruining the surprise for Death eater's daughter.. but oh well, it doesn't seem like I can stop readin anyways..

Oh, I think I just read too far into the story... Especially at the end, I want to know why Luci's room would do that.. Should I read... erm.. argh.. >_>... Can't think... UGH...
FINE ILL READ IT. lol, its too tempting... :P I guess I'll just pretend that I don't know anything when you update on Death Eaters Daughter..

Wow... wow... wow... Better than amazing!

AH, Ah, AH! Omg.. erm.. I'm teriffiiedd... :P lol its just a sign of your awesome writing skills.
And I'm so happy that Harry used 2 unforgivables.. :) I wanted to see the bad side of him. Like seriously, who cares when you're saving the world

Wow, that last bit was well written. It's different seeing all the romantic moments in harry's POV... Especially when they hugged, the descriptives made me picture them, and it was perfect! ah... :) I so wish that they could make a movie out of this... I think I'm going to go and look for actresses who could pass as Luci :)
And now I have to go and read the part where he defeats Voldemort! MWahaha... I don't think this part was in Death eater's daughter? Was it?.. My memory's a bit bad..

Sorry, I know that I'm annoying you terribly with every email that is sent to you when I review. Once again, I couldn't resist! *hides behind laptop*
I just wanted to say... R.I.P. HAGRID AND PROF. SPROUT!
I can't believe.. H-H-agrid.. :'(

Oh wow. I'm probably going to annoy you with all my reviews... but I just cannot resist. I have to say that this was a splendid chapter! I think that if there were any other way for Harry to find out about Snape, it would've been like this. .. ok, ill keep reading now.. :]

OMG, just figured out that I should've read this before 'The Death Eater's Daughter'... I know that I should(and probably would later on) review at the end, but I just couldn't resist... I think I'll read up to the part that your other story stopped at... Now there's an idea. Just don't want to spoil it for myself... :) Oh, have to get back to reading... This is going to be SO exciting! Ep!

I too suspect Nargles...Deathly Hallows wasn't what I thouht it would be and I cried my eyes out after reading it Because it felt rushed and fanfictiony to me...wriedness. Now speaking on fan fiction I greaty enjoed reading yours. Smiles.
-EssaBellia J.

I was just reading death eaters daughter and was checking what happened from the original when i saw that this story only had 193 reviews at the time. I realised i hadn't review it yet so i am just reviewing to improve the number of reviews to a story which is much better than the number of review indicates. Also if when uploading a new chapter of death eaters daughter you could write the corresponding chapter(s) of this story then it would be much appreciated.

thanx

Thanks for sharing your story!

Next time please dont use fan fiction as a place to vent it is beneath you as a writer if you have issues with the way in which Jo wrote HER 7th book then i suggest that you take it up with her on her main website having a cry on fan fiction is not going to get you any where and simply makes you look childish to all of your fans