awesome poem

my suggestion about the guy...

jump him

this came at the right time for me girl , plz keep it up for all those gurls who think guys can actually suck and be asses sometimes :)

haw..
wat makes yu soo emotional?
wanna talk about it?

add me on

..,. im good with advice im told.. xD

Wow...

your poems are really tragic, but som beautiful...

i loved it...

sorry about your boyfriend...
anyway i really liked the poem it really expresses your feelings

:O dang...she's really hurting... :) awesome! me likey!

O.O Sakura's speaking so... sadistically- like she got pregnant before break up! Wow, I've never experienced boyfriend girlfirend break ups yet but you just had to write this the day after your boo broke up with you. Sad...

I admit I'm uncertain what to make of this, strange mixture of images. Broken fragments of what seems to remain of emotions once held so closely now turned to ash.

Beautiful in its own way, but so very sad.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Damn Girl

My...my..my..very NICE!...deep meanings in there. Keep up the good work dear.

Love..Anthea!

Beautiful yet sad. Perhaps the better word would be bitter sweet.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

wow... this is very hard and different story...

A tottaly diferent context...

That is a wonderful poem. I wonder if you are going to continue writing poems arter this?

Dear mother of pearl! How emotive! The last 5 lines really clung on me. Love it. Absobloodylutely loved it. I smell an upcoming Shakespearean poet or whatever. And my senses are always accurate. HAHA. Awesome job, 'gal! Keep it up. =P

Lina.

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Sakura and Syaoran forever.