Okay. That was a really good story. I would have to say one of the best that I have read in a long time. And I would like to see more of it. :) Oh yeah I like your name too.

Wow. That was amazing. I'm hoping you'll continue it! *Is a Link/Zelda fan!* Write on!

Wow. Bev. This was EXCELLENT. So short, but so nice! The return of the beginning line was very stylish and made the overall tone powerful and professional. I loved this line: "Only, wake me when you leave, she asks. And he does. Only in the dream does he forget." This is Laura from the LOZFF.

I love it! next part please?

That was wierd...yet cool! Continue, or I'll use this very handy great Diety sword and come after you!Bwahahahahahaha!-all I have to say.

oh, it's so sweet!

'sniff' This was beautiful. I think you should write a chapter 2.

Good. Do more.:)

*snif snif* I liked this! ('Specially since it's Link/Zelda)

This is a good story.

That was good, but that was it? wai! ach, I really liked it anyway. Good job!

I just want to tell you that this is an excellent piece of writing. Keep up the good work. You almost had me in tears.

:)

Good story so far, but technically, Link should be the Prince Consort, not the King. It's like how Prince Phillip is NOT the King of England. A king is a higher rank than a queen and Zelda would be giving up HER power if Link were made king, something I'm sure she'd never do.

Aww, they're such a cute couple! This story is very emotional so far, but it is REALLY good.