| Reviews for Eggnog Butterfly |
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scis ipse 5/7/11 . chapter 1Is it an Uryuu thing to be randomly talking about butterflies? Because when they were imprisoned in Soul Society he was randomly talking about the little butterfly too. I really don't know but I think you wrote drunk!Orihime very well. I always love to find a cute bit of IshiHime fluff without all the unrequited love angst. |
don't resist 9/13/07 . chapter 1Yeah. Butterflies don't live that long, poor flutterbugs... Well, most butterflies don't. Monarchs live for about two years. [pushes up glasses] Fwah! Well, that made me feel a bit odd... I liked this one, especially the eggnog. Most eggnog isn't 'spiked' it just had a bit too much alcohol in it while it was being made. Alcohol is in eggnog, but it is usually cooked out. _ I'm gonna... finish this up before I embarass myself further and decide to be Ishida Uryuu for Halloween. Well, once again, I love this story. It's not Christmas, not even close, but I needed to read this one. Much Love, Hotari-chan |
Larie-chan 8/15/07 . chapter 1Ah, a slightly tipsy Orihime. Pure gold. I liked how you tied Uryuu's first thoughts about the butterflies (A very IC moment) to the very end. Skillfully done. May the Muses visit you often. |
shinpaku-teishi.xd0lL 6/29/07 . chapter 1haha, this was so cute. i liked your analogy about the butterflies and all that. write more, wakatta? :)) -*d0lL. |
Ruto Kuntai 5/31/07 . chapter 1Great chapter, thanks for the work. R.K. |
Psycotaco 4/25/07 . chapter 1Ha. spiked eggnog this is actually pretty good. I usually don't expect much from oneshots, but this fic really was satisfying. |
gracemis 4/5/07 . chapter 1Very Very lovely fluff. Your writing style is very engaging. Your pacing is excellent. You have a good balance between dialogue and descriptive narrative. thanks for sharing your stories. (I also read and liked Hidden Sheen and Patchwork). |
White Butterfly 3/21/07 . chapter 1Oh, Ishida! Don't be so glum! And only Orihime would like eggnog. Especially spiked eggnog. *nods* |
Kairi Uzeniba 3/10/07 . chapter 1Ah, so cute. :) Good job. |
Audley 2/23/07 . chapter 1Aw! That was adorable! You really captured Ishida's personality too-cutely shy and awkward, in love with Inoue, and desperately trying not to be too concerned with his outward appearance. Great job, truly. Aloha, Audley |
n00b-masta2112 2/17/07 . chapter 1Real cute. I like it. |
Dungeonwriter 2/15/07 . chapter 1What an adorable story! I love the butterfly comparison, very appropriate. |
Inulover4eva 12/31/06 . chapter 1aw so kawaii perfect for the holidays even though i am insanely late on reviewing and reading it haha happy new year! and yay for ishihime! |
I Heart Edward Cullen 12/27/06 . chapter 1Okay, okay, lemme guess. It was the whole scene with Ishida, in the jail, with the cabbage butterfly that made you write this. Am I right? I crack up every single time I see it. Glad to see you are on the side of good. IchigoOrihime... kinda strange and not really long term... and even worse- IchigoUryuu. Bleck. *chokes and falls out of chair* But this was simply unbearably cute. Almost made me want to eat jellybeans, and I abhor the stupid things. I especially loved the comment about Yoruichi's catty smile. Very good. XD |
6StringSamurai13 12/18/06 . chapter 1Wow..this was adorable. Great characterization for Ishida and his chat with Orihime was very close to what I'd expect from those two. Fluffy and cute imagery; I loved this! Keep up the great work, this was such an enjoyable read. |