Wow, you almost got me crying! This is a beautiful and sad story. I wrote an original fic that I think si the same, sad and beautifully written...I'm biased though, you can find it on fictionpress, let me know

Just to wet your appetite here's an excerpt:

"...Sitting here in the street with you in my arms. Liquid rubies stain the asphalt as lights flash all around, every one reflects off the pool that slowly creeps across the ground in a twisted version of light playing off water..."

No, I didn't plan on advertising my work, but since it's all typed out...I'm too lazy to delete it :P

omg, i'm crying..it was so good!

That is so beautiful. you made me cry. i just love it

Thats the first chase/cameron story ever to make me cry, and ive read a lot. well done that was beautiful and sad and in a strange way i loved it. your a really good writer.

Oh my God, Beautiful story, even made me cry.

Good job

ahh im in tears! that was so sad poor chase :(...danni

oh that's sad. :( the ending though the last paragraph EXCELLENT! my best compliments to the author. happy smile.

JESUS LOVES YOU!

M.W.H.

As sad as it is, I love it. Please keep up the amazing work.

beautifully written. you did a great job.

p.s. i didn't feel like logging in. sorry.

that's soo sad! Why must Chase suffer so much lost? But it was a very good story. Very well written. you should make more.

gosh heavy drama its so heartbreaking... and well written to.