 alliwant 4/21/07 . chapter 1lol. fourth memeber got a cold. lmao! i dont really mind cause this was really beautiful. loved it. the descriptive-ness and the adjectives and how you describe everything. you are really good at creating atmosphere and things like that. *clap clap clap* such a good author! |
 avery18 4/6/07 . chapter 1yes yes the 4th member has a cold.. In the hospital for days. Wait - wouldn't the 4th member be a medic nin? Oh well, those three are bad ass enough to make up for the 4th person :D Liked the story lots. |
 sparklegirl06 1/3/07 . chapter 1 I love it! Please write Neji tenten fanfics |
 SkyblueSunshine 12/26/06 . chapter 1HAH!
Now I know why all ANBU are issued masks: to hide their maniacal grins while massacring the enemy -_-'
("this intoxicating feeling of exhilaration that flares in her chest as she rips through the foreign shinobi, the rods of the nunchaku flailing and weaving. She just cannot stop grinning...") |
 Trunksmybaby 12/16/06 . chapter 1haha
but it was still good
keep up the good work.
and gai got a cold? oh really now? |
 lirpa-chan 12/14/06 . chapter 1This was a nice surprise to come across. Your writing style is thoughtful and, well, stylish. Excellent work.
Eraya _ |
 FlamingYingYang 12/14/06 . chapter 1that was amazing. i loved it. and the ending A/N...amazing. _ keep up the good work. Reya |