hey great story. is this the last chapter?
Amsy12

sadistic much? geez youre having everyone kill or be killed, I use sarcasm much, and that quote, "sarcasm is the truth from blood" everytime im sarcastic I will be reminded of that.

Oh lordy, what a story

oh, tears, tears

oh good golly gosh

yakimochi is japanese and means JEAULOUSY! :D

poor Rose!

Confusing- but really good. I loved the different languages you used (so cool) and that it was about the Mafia. Awesome!

hey,
u do realise that Yakimochi is grilled or broiled mochi or a pounded rice cake?
just thought i'd let u know that u named a character after a food dish =]

I was so surprised when i saw this on here again! Anyway, the chapter was cute and kinda sad w/ rose and all but i still liked it. Are you going to have more chapters up?

i thought 'aishiteru' meant 'i love you', actually i'm pretty sure it does. does it have two meanings?

That was cute. I'll be waiting for the next chapie!

...wow... what is yakimochi? or do i not want to know?

Its Sad that you never wrote a sequel but those little one-shots are nice.

O you accidently typed a paragraph twice it started at
"a-alice".I love this story!