o.o 1st chapter and im already hooked! wut an opening! i cant wait to read more of this awsum-ness, i just love these kind of stories. dark and epic :)

OMG! i loved this story so much, i had to read it in one go, just couldnt stop! normally i dont like ah storie but this is brilliant, my fav is aro, hes g8t :)

hey great story. is this the last chapter?

Amsy12

sadistic much? geez youre having everyone kill or be killed, I use sarcasm much, and that quote, "sarcasm is the truth from blood" everytime im sarcastic I will be reminded of that.

Oh lordy, what a story

oh, tears, tears

oh good golly gosh

yakimochi is japanese and means JEAULOUSY! :D

poor Rose!

Confusing- but really good. I loved the different languages you used (so cool) and that it was about the Mafia. Awesome!

hey,

u do realise that Yakimochi is grilled or broiled mochi or a pounded rice cake?

just thought i'd let u know that u named a character after a food dish ]

I was so surprised when i saw this on here again! Anyway, the chapter was cute and kinda sad w/ rose and all but i still liked it. Are you going to have more chapters up?

i thought 'aishiteru' meant 'i love you', actually i'm pretty sure it does. does it have two meanings?

That was cute. I'll be waiting for the next chapie!

...wow... what is yakimochi? or do i not want to know?