Story's great. However, can you seperate the different points of view with space or something. Theres always that moment of confusion as the narration suddenly changes from, say, Pheonix to Ark, for example. Other than that... great story.

wow... touching. BUT... HURRY UP AND UPDATE! actually, I should also hurry up and update. for those of you who are reading this review and have read the beginning of my PJO Chaos story, I am currently writing the nest chapter. Back on track, IF YOU DON'T UPDATE IM GONNA GET VIOLENT! SO GET YOUR (insert bad word cuz I'm not gonna write it) over here and UPDATE!

This is one of the best maplestory fan fics I have ever read. I sure hope you will put us all out of our misery and FINISH THE DAMN STORY ALREADY.

This has been the best story I ever read, and the first of many. I'm sure you exceed many authors, and deserve praise. I'm not sure about the... Cursing, but, I think this is the most wonderful FF I've ever read... I hope you keep on writing. I can guess how busy you must be, but... I hope you will never quit. I don't mind actually, any of your ramblings. I never skip them, to tell you the truth. I read all of them, no matter how strange, even if a page long or more. Please keep writing. I never had so much of an idea of how a battle scene would be and you inspired me. Please keep "typing".

Well, first things first.

First thing of all I can say that I can pretty much spot the mistakes in this story. And. Uh... There's a lot.

Well, if I could I would be posting one entire chapter of mistakes but... Sadly, I'm on the iPod, and thus I can't type the chapter in(stupid computer-hogging parents)

But to soften that stupid blow of your mistakes, I shall not throw them at your face. I know the you're revising this, but I'm pretty much serious. Anyway.

I've enjoyed this story a lot. I've sacrificed many hours of my life reading this(much to the disappointment of my parents and the deterioration of my sleep and marks. Can't have everything.)

I'm pretty much saddened by the story when it stopped. All of a sudden. In the middle of the story.

Once again, you can't have everything in life.

I've noticed that your fighting scenes are a lot like... Well... Turn-based battles? Like rpg games? I've noticed you stated that, but I couldn't resist saying that; it was like that all the way in the story.

(insert sample from story here)

I'm sorry, but I am not good at writing. Much.

You're responsible for most of my battery life and the electricity bill.

I'm not expecting you to have a reply... I'm not that much of a hater. But what I said in the previous sentence is completely, utterly, and sadly true.

Anyway.

Your writing is not shitty, your writing is not excellent.

It's not crappy.

It's not great

It's just good.

I've noticed that your writing has become more and more mature throughout the story, but you, overall remain the same.

This story belongs to you. Not to the reviewers; they have no right to yell at you to update, and neither do I. Not to the flamers; if they hate it, why do they read it? Answer: because they actually like it.

Not much, but at least they like it.

I'd say that you're up there with the senior writers(not saying that you're old, just better at writing than the rest.)

Overall, I hope you'll update.

Hi.

It had been a few years. Time flew past so fast and I am already 15 years old soon. I reread your story again, to be please that it doesn't disappoint me. Though I can understand you are an were busy (me too), I sincerely hope you can finish this story, Whether months or years later. I am sure many of the people will wish you to finish the story. It is not that I can't imagine the ending itself. Your writing contains were just so ..., they absorb you inside your world of story. Seriously I like this story damn much. Haha.

This is brought to you be Rena (RenaMM), never commented by this name.

Just wow, I spent most of my break reading this story because i heard so much about it. Its been a year since the last thing you posted i really loved this story i wanted to read how Phoenix becomes a bowmaster and beats gault how Ark learns to use the reavers how theyd win the war how Aslan would learn to love his father how iggy and the rest become i really liked it now all i have to say is... GO TO HELL you wrote it for fame? You never cared for your fans? Wow... Also i doubt you'll read this so again GO TO HELL YOU MOTHER FUCKING FAMEHOUND

Kal, I don't know if you're out there or if you even still read these. I want you to know that this story is incredibly awesome, and I wanted to thank you for writing what you did write, whether you finish it or not.

wowowowowowowowowowow

After two years of resignation, it came upon me today to check if you'd written any stories since then. And chancing upon this made me feel like I could take all the arrows in the world in my knee and still be insanely happy.

You're a really awesome writer, and whether or not you do continue Revolt (which would be nice, but not compulsory), I hope you'll keep on writing. The world needs to remember what great fanfic is really like.

Yours,

avidness personified

This is from a writer on FanFiction to another fellow writer, a writer that wrote the first story I read on this site, a writer that gave me inspiration to embark on my first story, and a writer that I now have utmost respect for.

I'm going to start by saying that your story is amazing, but I think you've already heard that countless times that such a compliment becomes sort of meaningless. Well, let me tell you exactly how amazing I find this story.

Your characters are bloody well-developed (though admittedly, I have forgotten most of the characters due to the inexorable passage of time), but over the two years since I've last read the story, I've not forgotten the plot. That in itself, is an incredible feat, considering how I have read so many other stories of different genres during that two years. Still, Revolt of the Archers had always been a presence in my mind - and still is - no matter how it might have shrunk a little in size. I'm still, after the two years, waiting for an update from you. Because, despite what you might think about how you rush blindly through the story just to meet a particular deadline you have set for yourself, this is still, overall, a wonderful and mindblowing story.

Words elude me to describe how incredible it is.

Another thing that strikes me about this story is how it actually shows that you have grown in maturity throughout the 4 years. I can literally notice the change, no matter how small and gradual it is. And I can safely say that you have shaped yourself into a mature adult worth every little bit of respect from me.

Do not blame yourself for your little 'review hunger', as almost all the authors on this site are guilty of that. I, myself, suffers from that disease, and constantly hungers for more reviews. It is not something to be embarrassed or depressed over, we are merely human after all.

Nobody's perfect.

I have to say, that your confession is undoubtedly one of the most beautiful one I've ever read. You laid your heart bare for all your readers, and I think it's only fair that we do exactly the same.

So, this is a gift from a writer to another fellow writer.

A gift of a review that I hope might give you the inspiration, the motivation you will need to continue the wonderful story you have started in 2006.

The wonderful story that is the Revolt of the Archers.

I am only 11 but reading this entire story was great i havent found any problems when i was reading it a few months ago. Please Please continue the story xD

I think it's time for another review Kal.

Last time I reviewed, it was almost a year ago. I still haven't forgotten Revolt, or you. Sure, I've read a few more MapleStory fanfictions here and there, but none of them shoved their way into my heart. I guess the reason I loved it so much was because I could really relate to Zeraion. About how he felt about being pushed around, and how he wanted to be the best. Every Mapler did in the good old days. It twists my heart to remember the days when everyone was kind. When everyone helped you. When MapleStory was the life you've always wanted.

I continue to play MapleStory to this very day. I'm still a kid at heart. MapleStory is... okay nowadays, but I miss the old days. The nostalgia that I always felt. That I feel now whenever I walk into Sleepywood or Ellinia. Or Orbis. The nostalgia that will never fade. ...

And now I'm here, again. For the... third? fourth? time. This story is great. Really great. It's inspired me in so many ways, it really got me back into MapleStory, back into shooting arrows and blowing up stuff as a Hunter. I can't get over it. I really can't. And you're the entire reason why. I know how it feels to get hacked, come back to find you have nothing. How it feels to get ks-ed just because you're an archer, or how it feels to be called stupid because you don't have ATK 15 Work Gloves or a godly scrolled Zakum Helmet. Trust me, I've been there.

Kal, I can't even begin to express how much your story has changed me. It's inspired me so much as a writer. As a reader. As a mapler. As a human. Often times, I imagine what it would be like if Revolt was real. I think it would be pretty cool, but of course, that's just me.

Let's get off that for now, shall we?

I still can't get over Ascion's death. It makes me cry every time, Ascion was someone I really connected well to. He was actually what I wanted to be in MapleStory, a great and powerful Priest. I'm at the Priest part... but unfortunately, I don't have Heavenlapse or a giant dragon anymore. I just have a stupid Shining Ray level 1. But you don't need that to have fun, do you.

Kal. I'm not gonna go on a rampage and say I love you or anything corny like that. I'm just going to say that I respect you. I really do. You started writing this when you were just fourteen. I loved it. It was a great story back then. It made you seem so much more literate than a fourteen year old should be. It makes me wish I was as great as you. Maybe one day, I will be. I hope so.

I also remembered that you brought up Flames of the Uprising once. Thus, I read it. It wasn't as exciting as Revolt, and personally, I didn't think it was better. Revolt was just the greatest, and I know that's a little farfetched, but to me, as a kid back then, it was true. I thought Revolt of the Archers was the grand motherload of epic fanfiction. And of the MapleStory section, and to me, it still is. I just wish I knew how the story ends.

Wow. I can't believe I keep backtracking to this fanfiction over and over again. It sucked me in years ago, and now it won't let me go. I suppose that's a good thing, I don't want to forget Revolt of the Archers, ever. It's an excellent story, and I love it. I really do. It's... just great.

Zeraion is really the person I want to be. He's amazing. The goals he has- become the best archer, save the world, avenge Grace- they're all goals I would have if put into his situation. It doesn't help the fact that I'm an archer by heart either. More so, the relationship between him and Tales is wonderful to read and understand. The friendship that evolved into an unbreakable companionship, it's amazing. Tales and Zeraion are great friends. They trust each other, don't they?

And then, there's the Devil Children. Tales, Natalia, Iggy and Delinia. The relationship between Natalia and Iggy, the brother-sister thing is touching. Very touching. How Natalia stood up for Iggy as a kid, and how Iggy has total faith in her. How the four eventually have complete trust in each other, and complete faith in each others' abilities is amazing. I think they work so well together, the four have some quality friends that will last a long time.

And of course, Gardner and Zeraion. It's almost like Gardner is replacing the father that Zeraion lost. Maybe Gardner knew Zeraion's parents, we don't know for certain. I love their relationship, Zeraion may be distasteful of Gardner's decisions and training sometimes, but he seems to trust the bowmaster and have faith in his training rituals. And then, Gardner looks at Zeraion almost like a son, trying to train him so that he can save the world, and so that he'll end up alive in the end.

Kal, I have some advice, take it or not. I think you should either- and don't get offended, I'm just suggesting- rewrite the entire story of Revolt how you wanted it, without all the holes, imperfections and blatant rip-offs, or at least post a summary of what happens at the end. I'd love to know how it ends, and probably, a lot of other people do too.

And well...

I can't believe it. This review has gone longer than half the world limit. Wow. I can't believe I had that much to say. Kal, really, at least let us see the rest of the story, and what happens. Even if it's just some screwed up basic plot line, I'd take that. I want to see the end of Revolt, I desperately want to know what happens. At least give us that mercy.

-Deku

whatever floats your boat man. It's your story :)

Great story. Sorry I wasn't reviewing on the other chapters, I just HAD to continue reading this great story. Well, anyway, great story. Why am I keeping on saying great story? Oops.