Well written fic albeit a bit sad. But it's true the best things are worth waiting for.

aw nice story^^

Very good story. IMHO, it fully catches the IchiRuki dynamics, as well as the possible future they might have together, complications and all. Write more!

Great story, you've kept them well in character. Good job!

very good

ooh...nice...and deep...and CUTE!

Good fic.
Though I really think you should make a second chapter, where they finally get to be together. (What can I say, I'm just an idealist).

So this is what you've been doing! Great work as always. Looking forward to more Kismet.

-JW

awesome fic... enjoyed reading it a lot...

Nice. Sweet. I enjoyed it. ^^

OMG how is it possible that I've never read this story before? I'm always on the hunt for great IchixRuki and here is one that isn't faved or recommeded by a lot of people! How messed up is that? This is one of the best ones I've read yet!

great one shot! really sweet

very nice. are you going to continue?

Beautiful story.

So many small moments they shared together, perhaps there will be a time when she doesn't have to walk away.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

this one of the best that i have read in sometime it fits the thea very well.

its something that ends very cleanly so to say but more of this would be lovely lol

good work