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2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved this. It had me smiling from all the Balthier and Fran interaction that I can't stop now, seriously. ^^ I really hope that you write more on this because it has good potential, especially how you kept them in character so well. Anyway, hope you continue this and this is one of the best Balthier/Fran fics out there.

Oh yeah, I laughed at the Moogle bringing in the tray. I could imagine perfectly Balthier shooing one out with a crutch.

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talholuvr
2007-03-28 . chapter 1
DUDE YOU NEED TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER FOR THIS :P...your writing is really good and there are not many Fran Balthier fanfics out there and your is by far the best...So keep it up :P
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2007-01-03 . chapter 1
oh they're so cute!

and balthier was so honorable to let fran have the bed to herself LOL

no..he may be a lady's man but he'd never sneak himself a grope or two ^_^
goodwitch08
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
I'm jealous of you seriously! Lovely lovely lovely!
Oro4
2006-12-29 . chapter 1
no kissy? You were so close!! honestly! good job! I really like it! Bathier and Fran really are the bestest couple
Etoiile
2006-12-20 . chapter 1
ah poor balthier D:
he must be feeling VERY uncomfortable for sleeping like that xDD;;
i mean, gee, three months! o__o;
tho`, i must admit, three months seem too long.

anyways, this is a nice piece of work.
i liked the balfran-ness (:
they were in character n__n

please write more soon ~

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.
mandy
2006-12-15 . chapter 1
Beautiful writing. I hope to see more.
Arisa
2006-12-14 . chapter 1
I love your work to pieces. Beautifully done.
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