I get so excited when someone actually writes a fic from Donald's point of view. This is a cool snippet of insight, and I like your descriptive language. Well done, I dig it muchly.

This is really awesome. It's always nice to see some unusual perspectives; Donald and Goofy are two MAJOR characters, yet almost always overlooked. So many people forget the Disney aspects that made this such a great game to play. I'm glad not EVERYONE has forgotten.

Good one-shot; I liked it a lot. Nobody gives Donald enough credit (including me, but he always bugged me, ever since...well, actually the scene you just recreated. Umm...is it my fault I'm a rabid fangirl?). The imagery is very good, and I like how you built up the tension.

"There was nothing wrong with the guy, visually speaking. Tall, tanned skin, athletic build, surf-tossed silver hair, light green eyes..." *GLOMPS* Yummy! Um, ahem...sorry.

GOOD JOB TIMES ELEVENTY BILLION!

Can I say that I've often wondered what churns in Donald's mind every so often? Sometimes I think it's spontaneous, but I've had faith that's it's actually been thought out a little.

I'm real glad you wrote this, because it's given me a solid picture in my head that I can fully agree with. Not only that, but you kept Donald very well in-character as well! (I've always loved him... he's not the most intelligent being in the world, but he's not extremely rash, either. He's a bright little bulb. )

Okay, that's enough of the content. You've written this superbly, and definitely an awareness to Donald's perspective. So I don't think I can fully critique you, until I realise that there can be more than this. (Grammatically, you could explore a little more, and be a bit more precise. ; ) That may take a while, though...

You've got talent, hun. Keep it up. ( Faves)

NettikGirl

Yay a Donald fic! I love Donald, he's usually pretty rare here in fanfiction, so I'm proud of you for making one! Very well written by the way, love Donald's poetic half lol. Well anyhows great job, and hope to see more work from ya! Ookies! (::)

-Riku-stalker

Whoa, Donald can see auras...well, that explains a lot.

But then shouldn't he have known they absolutely SHOULDN'T go with Riku, even if the King said so? Then again, the Keyblade's aura must have accepted Riku's, even for a short while, so...