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| Six-string Samurai 2007-11-12 ch 4,  | abuseHmm, that was a fun little ride. I'm surprised there aren't more reviews for this. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-10 ch 4, | abuseI think using the orange juice was perfectly legit. She was using magic wasn't she? So a little florida orange juice was perfectly fair. Great banter between Ranma and Akane. OK I have to admit feeding Sailor Moon the Benito Akane made him was evil! I think it may even have been outlawed by the Geneva convention. *Grin* I love the /battle/ he had with Chiba-Usa. That was just too funny. I would have liked to have seen him get slapped around by her six foot heart attack tho'! I have to say he wasn't beaten by Jupiter tho' He was already knocked out by Akane and Ukyou. Nice ending. I'd still like to see the two chapters you say sucked. Post them separately under the title /Too much of a good thing/ or /this blows!/ *grin* |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-10 ch 3, | abuseCologne is up to something. She always is. I think it's more to relieve boredom then to actually bring Ranma into the tribe tho'. *grin* I can't believe how many people just take Kuno or Ryoga's word at face value when it comes to Ranma. They must have been looking for a reason. The fights just weren't long enough to be interesting. I would have preferred longer ones in a field with plenty of room for Ranma to play with them before knocking them down. They were funny tho'! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-10 ch 2, | abuseThe curses fit Chiba-Usa and Rei but I'm not sure a bunny fits Minako that well. With the way you defined the springs there's not many other ways you could have gone with it tho'. I liked the scene at the amazon village. Nicely done. *Grin* Great ending line for the chapter. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-10 ch 1, | abuseWith the way Usagi and Chiba-Usa argue I was half expecting Usagi to threaten to get her tubes tied. *grin* I like the Ami-looks-like-Akane joke you tossed in. I hope you have more of a crossover then that planned. |
| Cristina 2002-05-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseWell this was just great. I loved it. And am antisapating the sequel. Can't wait!!! |
| ariel stormcloud 2002-05-20 ch 6, | abusegreat story |
| Ghost in the Machine 2001-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseTwenty Kilometers is a little over 12 miles. I don't know about you, but I've walked home from that distance in four hours. Ami, at least, should know that it won't be that bad. |
| Phoenix of Blood Red Mars 2001-07-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is good! I can't wait for the next part! |
| Lacrea Moonlight 2001-06-26 ch 4, | abusei love this!!!!!!!!!! |
| Lacrea Moonlight 2001-06-26 ch 3, | abuseI love the last part! "Open mouth, insert foot." HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! |
| Phoenix of Blood Red Mars 2001-06-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is good! Is the girl that looks like Ami Akane? I can't wait for the next part! |
| MadHat 2001-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a crossover with what? |
| Anime Princess 2001-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWOW! This is AWESOME! POST MORE ASAP! I wonder what this is crossovered with! POST MORE ASAP! I LOVE how Usagi is much more mature and serious now! Love ya, Sam |