Hi my name is avonda alleyne.i read your fanfics and let me say,both fanfics are great with alot action.I prefer sasuke and tori are a ntinued writing more great fanfics.

Wow, what a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter, hope to see an update soon!

konnichiwa!
omg! This chapter was excelent, I can't wait to see the next one!
I read Naruto: A new chapter, and think it was fantastic.
Continue this fanfic, please. I wanna see what happens next.

Sincerely

Nichi Tsukino

PD: Sorry for the grammar mistakes, I'm from Venezuela and I speak Spanish most of the time.

I've been so busy, but I finally got around to reading this and...I LOVE IT! Might be all the Naruto in it, but YAYZ! It made my day. :)

Bleh, I'm doing fine, but I was away from my computer for a l-o-n-g time and I can't believe that I missed so many chapters~! Ugh, must finish reading them all!
My gods, I can't believe how far you've improved~! ^-^ When I had been reading "Naruto: A New Chapter", I thought that this was just another story and I kinda liked it, but there were so many grammar mistakes and everything that I thought of giving up on it. Now, you're on your 28th chapter of "Naruto: Clash of Two Worlds", and I love it~! I'm always guessing what's gonna happen next~!
Poor Naruto. I'll bet Fushicho is going to have some fun torturing him. >-

good chapter. bet you miss me huh/ lol anyway good chapter and nice fight. can't wait for the next chapter.

I really liked this chapter. Naruto's got a lesson to learn and Fushicho has something more planned for him. This is exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ok I really think your makeing your oc's a little bit to strong? I mean she knows the rasengan. And naruto still looks like a skilless punk. Not to be mean but you could make him stronger or her weaker.

That was good, I throughly enjoyed the chapters. (I had to read the two latest because I haven't really had much time lately...)

Excellent work on the fight scenes. I like Fushicho's style of training.

Ja ne!

Yuo better update soon for Naruto not being in it. And wtf dude ur training hinata more then naruto! lol Thats pretty messed up. Since naruto is ur fav charicter. lol. i wana she naruto own some ppl. Lol i know u have the best intentions in mind but I'm just impateint. Lol O and is jiryia going to die in this fic? If so I better get the tissues ready T.T lol. I just wana see naruto woop some **. I mean like Bruce lee wooping **. I know you cant wait to write some fights where naruto woops some majotr ** I know u cant wait to.

A new character eh? Things are starting to get interesting. No need to feel like you HAVE to post a chapter a week, take your time. Later!

Sorry I haven't been available these past weeks, I've had a lot of computer trouble and I'm not really into Naruto anymore because of Shipuudden. So it does get difficult to keep up with Ninja of Fate's alert stories, but with fics like this, I can still feel spirit of my youth when I used to watch it. Another great chapter dude, keep them coming!

Dude great chapter...I mean I love the story...but...lol Naruto..is just so weak..its pathetic...ok keep the same pace of his trainging..but can you try to put more detail into it? I am a big fan of naruto so it agravates me just to see him so weak. But your the best athour on this site and propley the rest. It's just Naruto and the others(** sasuke burn in hell you pansy ** ** you think your so cool o you can blow it!!) *cough* sorry about that anyway are just so weak...lol ...again your the best athour when it comes to anime. Mybe you should think of makeing your own manga or book series.

Gah~! Good chapter, good chapter, VERY GOOD CHAPTER~!
Omg, the suspense~! Oh, update soon soon soon...
The begining was suspenseful (reborn Sharingan [I wanna ask what it is, but I don't wanna spoil it for myself] and the weird prediction thing) and then funny (birdie+Naruto). Eh, Nezumi is so cute~!

Good chapter plz update soon(i curse that PS3)