Jinx is definitely an interesting character to work with especially with KF and you did well touching on that.

Well done.

SpiritoftheBlackRose

It was sweet...but not very poetic. Poems don't ever have to rhyme (I actually prefer the ones that don't) but they usually have some sort of rhythme to them, and I didn't sense one here.

Disenchanted

-I have a TT fic of my own and am looking for feedback. A review on at least the first chapter would be really appreciated _ Don't feel obliged to or anything, though. Thanks! (If you want to see a bit of a summary you can just go to my profile...)-

It's so sweet! You really dug into her thoughts.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Keep the good writing.

sweet!