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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-05 ch 5,  | abuseABSOLUTELY PERFECTION I LOVED IT! Great story... JENNIFER |
| xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-03-24 ch 5, | abuseAw yay. Great work on this. perfect story to curl up on the couch after dinner while it is raining and read. thx a lot. :D |
| LiaBelle 2007-02-16 ch 5, | abuseK, totally loved it. SO so cute! really. it was amazing! |
| Elainhe 2007-01-14 ch 5, | abuseNow this is the perfect epilogue for any DL story. I LOVE the chapter title! I love each line of dialogue, and I love the very appealing imagery (of course ;)). But, what is really special to me about this chapter, is the feeling, the love. I adored Danny's list. How sweet. So much, much greater than just another Christmas gift, so much more in line with the spirit of Christmas! Bravo!! Please keep writing these beauties, and - if you will - teach me how to get ideas like these rather than the piles of angst my muse keeps bombarding me with. |
| Elainhe 2007-01-14 ch 4, | abuseAgain, very enjoyable dialogue! :) And, good for Danny, making the romantic choice: "It was only money, after all. This experience had proven to be priceless." You've written their intercation with amazing warmth in this chapter. |
| Elainhe 2007-01-14 ch 3, | abuseWhat a guy wouldn't do for love? Lovely descriptions indeed. My favourite line: "“Well we can’t just have a bare-assed tree,” Danny pointed out." I can so hear him say that. Oh, an dthen there is the "let's screw" line ... |
| Elainhe 2007-01-14 ch 2, | abuseLovely, I could smell the gingerbread. :) I like the dialogue in this chapter, and the teasing between them. Lovely build-up towards Christams. What better than making your own Christams tradition? ;) |
| Elainhe 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseFinally, I get to catch up. :) What a lovely idea - pitty I couldn't read it over Christmas time. I loev how you write the romantic aspects of their relationship, depicting the easy comfort they have. Great work on the introduction too, describing Lindsay's attempt at Christmas shopping. |
| ameriker 2007-01-12 ch 5, | abuseSweetest chapter ever! Amazing job! :D |
| cyko1003 2007-01-12 ch 5, | abuse*collapses in a fit of giggles* i only got to this now as i just got the alert on it a two days ago - SO FRICKING CUTE. I love the list, it make me all wubly and giggly and he! Glad yu finished it so cute... totally, totally awesome. Wubbing you lots! |
| wjobsessed 2007-01-09 ch 5, | abuseThanks for another great DL story :) |
| dddynamite 2007-01-08 ch 5, | abuseAw what a perfect ending ot a perfect story! |
| CSIMel 2007-01-08 ch 4, | abuseaw, that's adorable! I always wanted to go on a sleigh ride, but when you live in a place where it doesn't snow, you can only dream. And this fic made me feel like I was on one! Great job XD |
| sheltie 2007-01-08 ch 5, | abuseabsolute fluff great job |
| SallyJetson 2007-01-07 ch 5, | abusesub-arboreal - new word... love new words! will have to look it up later! Loved Danny's list, I don't even know if I can chose a favorite... for humor - Your smile (even if it cost me fifty bucks to stare at two horses’ asses for an hour) for sweetnes - A breath of country air in the city smog for inspiration - Belief – in me for the future - A reason to be a better person Lindsay had the perfect reaction - Who wanted diamonds, anyway? Sweet, wonderful wrapup! SJ |