I loved this! Inside, I could feel Millie's own torment as she had spoken to him. But, to tell you the truth, Kane leaves Millie after this, while she is shoping for food to make the 'Greatest Meal in the Universe'. Just telling ya.

very well writen (.) don't feel bad about not being able to see the last 4 episodes... you see i only got to watch 3 episodes and they were on the spanish channel (i'm not to good with spanish, 3 years of it in school is still no help lol) but i'll say this, that was great!

It was a good work. Although you worked very well with Millie's feelings, it was predictable. But don't be upset, because it's (TOOOOO) difficult to be original if you based your work in one scene of the real story, or if you are trying to "couple" two characters. I never made a good story of this kind (good by my standards not of my friends. I can't stand them even if my friends liked so much). Guess we both have to work harder...

Wai! That was so good! The fic had lots of emotions, and it was really sweet. Keep it up!

I've only seen 4 eps. of Lost Universe, so I am pretty much left completely clueless. But I loooove the Milly-Kane pairings. I think they'd go so cute together. Other Demon-Nekos disagree and say Canal and Kane go better together, but.. _ Canal will never be as cool as Milly! Go Milly fans, go! (I'm one of those hopeless people who get they're best thrills from watching anime, and playing video games. I cry myself to sleep at night. I'm those people Myril from Trigun talk about in the second ep. Yes, I am one of them. Now shaddap.)

YES! Finally some one has created a Lost Universe Fanfic. Excellent! Listen, are you going to write any more? If you are, let me beta read them. Lost Universe is to me the greatest anime EVER! A more active story would be great, include a space battle or Psi-blade fight in the next one. Email me at

Very cool.

OH. MY. GOSH! FINALLY! A LOST UNIVERSE FANFIC! And my second favorite pairing, to boot! (NeenaxRail is my first. ;; Eeeeto...)

but if you need the last four episodes...I have them fansubbed, if you'd like to e-mail me. o Anyway, great job! Maybe you could help me out with mine...I've been stuck on it for about a year, and it starts off really well! T.T

This was a pretty cool fic. I, myself just finished watching the Lost Universe series and I think you did a great job with this scene. Please keep writing.

Just so that you know, your fic is almost exactly like it happens in the series! (Dang, you must be psychic!) I have seen the last episodes however and would be glad to give you a summary or two. (e-mail me: )

You rule man! Really, e-mail me back and we can chat over this because I'm going to start up a LU fanfic too! Hope to hear from you soon, and keep up the good writing! (Oh yeah, now for the analysis of your work; your writing was incredibly strong with more written into one mere sentence than one could possibly imagine! You portray their characteristics very well and seem to have an incredible background knowledge of the series! You need to try another fanfic from either LU or another series you are very familiar with.)

Ilove Lost Universe, and I'm not a fan of Kane-Milly pairing, but this was a very good fic. You did a great job keeping Milly in character, even in her thoughts. I commend you! _ I hope you finish the series soon, and write more fanfiction for it!

Ever since first seeing this series, I've been a Kane/Milly fan. Keep 'em coming.

Wow! Great story! There are soooo few LU fics out there v.v I've only seen a few episodes(but they were SUBTITLED! Thank God for DVDs! and I REALLY hate the English voices, ugh, Kane really does sound like a dork ;_; and he's my fav chara!) Write more LU stuff!

Love it! I've only seen the first have of Lost Universe (and dubbed... argh! Why are subs so hard to find? ADV sucks... why couldn't Software Scultures or some other company get it?), so I don't really get the scene [yet], but it's soo sweet! Hee, so cute, too. - Kain is such a cutie, don'tcha think? And yeah, sometimes I wonder why Milly bothers to hang around Kain after all the crap he put her through (mostly unintentionally, tho ;). Great story! Please write more!