this was a great story

great story can't wait to find out what happens next please update as soon as you can thanks for writiing a great story

This was a absolutely awsome story.
The only issue I would have is the nudity in front of parents. While I'm not a prude, I think in most if not all cultures, it is an inherent thing to be repulsed from walking around naked in front of your children..more so in front of your teenage some or daughter and to have the same teens doing likewise in front of the adults.

It was also refreshing to see them wait until they are married to have sex..and when you write about it, it isn't all graphic..the idea of writing stories is to leave something to the imagination..if you want full on graphics..go see a movie to watch tv..where yoiu don't need imagination.


Anyway that is my only critisim..otherwise like I said this was a awsome story..well done.

:)

Strange I would have thought that as a chem prof you would have known that making potions is a form of cooking that takes a lot of skill. The idea that Hermione could not cook at all is rather stupid given her ability with potions. Like I said making potions is a very high cooking skill, (I know because I make several medicinal potions each year following family tradition) it is not like chemistry where you simply add a few chemicals together, it really does require cooking and sometimes baking skills.

I find the idea of Hermione walking about the house naked in front of her father, rather disturbing. I mean what kind of pervert shares a hot tub with his naked 17 year old daughter. I refuse to believe that any guy who would do this simply because he is a 'nudist' is not perverted in some twisted way.
Fathers are supposed to protect their daughters modesty, not to compromise it by having said daughter naked in front of them. The whole idea is just some sick twisted perversion practiced by men who leer at their young women to their hearts content.

I enjoyed your story. It was grammatically correct to a much higher degree than most fanfiction. It was also fairly original, and most importantly, fun to read.

lol if I was Harry I have to say I would feel weird around Hermione and her family if I found out about the walking around naked part. So I guess Hermione's father see's her naked just odd to me but to each their own i guess.

Great story so far can't wait to finish it

Good Day,

I just wanted to let you know that I have just finished reading Hermione's Plan and found that I had a bit of trouble just putting it down after starting it. You are a fabulous writer and appear very skilled in getting any message you wish across to the reader. As a parent myself I noticed a lot of your 'teachings' and approve of the way you managed to place them in a story, but also made them 'stick' in the mind of the reader. You are very talented and I am honored to read your work. I noticed that you might be 'retiring' and understand the wife issues as well, but hope to see more of your work. Yes, I have read Soul Searching, but need to re-read it as I am drawing a blank. I am also a good fan of Old Crow and you 2 seem to be on the same level of talent. I could honestly not choose one or the other if I had to. Good luck in your endeavors whether or not you keep writing fan fic.

Thomas

This is an interesting story.

Only thing I can see wrong with this chapter is something that about half of HP fanfic writers get wrong.

Dolores not Delores.

Like I said, you're not the first to get that spelling wrong, you won't be the last *grins*

I found this story captivating. It took me several long days to complete, what with work and other responsibilities, but it was definitely worth it. Congratulations on your time spent, it was worthily invested.

this was an excellent story the plot twists were well thought out and played. I have always thought JKR didnt give Hermione her dues with repect to the relationship she and Harry had.

Well, fanfiction universally portrays Susan as an Orphan because she IS one. It's canon.
In the first book, Hagrid mentions that Voldemort killed "Some of the best witches and wizards of the age. The Bones, the Prewetts..."
We also know/suspect that Susan lives with her aunt, it's hinted at in the 5th book, and that at least one of her family members was in the order. I think, from the fifth book? It mentions a Bones, I'm pretty sure.
Anyway, does that clear that up?

okay, it took me three tries and three days to read this story completely. And it was worth it. Superb job.

I forget which chapter it was in but you said that Harry might have to marry another girl for the other family. I was thinking about it in these last chapters and to be honest the only other person that you have talked about that would fit and work with them would be Padma. I really love the story so far.