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| swordbunny4486 2008-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting |
| Rae666 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYou are truly a gifted writer. Great little story... makes me feel like just giving Dean a great big hug. |
| Rinne 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. |
| PhoenixDragon 2006-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, yes indeedy, let's start with the angst!! OMG, the dark yumminess of this fic knocked the damn wind out of me! the delicious whiff of black despair tinged with chilling bloodlust! Guh... *Drools helplessly* So, so god! Send more, I'm already feeling the ache for another dark!goodie like this! *huggles thee mightily!* *Adores* |
| Luxorien 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, I liked that. Great imagery, great characterization. |
| Caitiri 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuse"He didn’t answer his brother’s call. Not yet. He needed a moment, needed to make sure the emptiness was filled, with words or an expression, it didn’t matter so long as it was full. Because right now all he had was the emptiness, and that wasn’t for Sam to see" That line just really got me. You wrote a really good story. |
| vanillafluffy 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuse"When Dean faced Sam, a person had to meet the younger man’s eyes, a person who could at least pull a thin, almost entirely worn veil of a soul around his lies and facades and pretend like there was no switch that separated conscience from duty." I love this! |
| Nana56 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseCongratulations on finishing finals! Feel like you've been let out of jail? I alway did. Nice little story...the sort of thing that might fill in the gap between whatever the event was and gettingthehelloutofdodge. |
| StealerOfDreams 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I like rain, too. Maybe not blood raining. "He was crap at hiding things from Sam. Really, shockingly, stupendously crap at it." Made me laugh. Not really how I see Dean, 'cos if anyone has a mega guilt complex, it's him. But it's still going on my favourites list :) See you around. |
| Ashodeus 2006-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this was... powerful. I totally loved it. Especially those last two sentences... *still speechless* That Drabble is so absolutely Dean... Never thought I'd find something good written like it on |
| cat 2006-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome! I really enjoyed reading that peice, you have a nice style. Was that a one off? Because you have begun a good foundation for an interesting story. Keep up the great work! |
| gotmilk 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, Dean. This is heartbreaking. Excellent job. |
| Ash8 2006-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes. Just. Yes. I really liked that. Perfect I thought, |
| wild wolf free17 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThe symbolism behind each word is awesome. I caught but one typo: "The droplets caught the light, but just for just a moment." - One of the 'just's needs to go. |