dude i got chills!! seriously!!
wow, i like it!!

Cute, keep up the good work!

Aw. It was so good. Romance is my favorite most of the time, but this was just so good. Keep writing.

Fantasy Fan Girl

Aw, cute story.

AWW! The kawaiiness jumped out of the closet and attacked me! ...AW!

YO!
... I know I'm like a year late for reviewing this, but I found this on someone's faves list, so checked it out.

Wow. When 'Junior' (cute) did his imitation of Roy being mad, I was totally laughing. But when he said, "Hughes!" I was like wide awake... Wow. I practically froze up like Roy, too, as I kept reading, finding out that Hughes was only considered as "Your Uncle Maes." I freaked out. I was 'ohmygawding'.

And to think that maybe Maes was there the entire time after all. Wow. Really... wow is a total understatement. There aren't enough words or a word to describe the 'paranormal activity'. Y'dig?

(By the way, Royai pwns!... or owns... same diff.)


FLAMETAL-_-

such a cute story. Sad, but really cute!

I had to smile at this--wonderfully written and crafted. +faved.

LOL! So sweetly cute and well done! LOL! Sounds just like a story I would've written, hehe. ((Actually, "I Will Return" has a similar premise, heh. If you haven't read that, you should, lol.)) This was adorable. I so much wish I was a kid again, when seeing and talking with ghosts would have been easier. Heh, I can still do it, but it's not as easy. ;) Anyway, loved the fic. You should make more like this. This was sweet.

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I LOVE FAMILY!ROYAI! :D

I'm a bigger fan of royxed, but this was really well done!~~

aw.. great job here! i really like the plot and all.. especially the part with Maes Hughes.. ehehe.. keep up the good work! ja!

Erinn~

Nice concept, I like it a lot. Great job!