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| alixandra 2008-04-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseomg omg omg omg i love this so far but you havent updated in forever you realy need to because i bet that im not the only one that loves it so pleas update soon... soon i say soon |
| AGENT BLOSSOM 2008-03-20 ch 7, | abusexD God I love this story! Update soon! |
| KibaxHinata 4ever 2008-03-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseYo, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story, I'm waiting for the next update, hope it comes soon, ja! ^_^ |
| HinataDelDesiertoUchija 2008-02-06 ch 7, | abusewow this story is actually really fun at first i was getting bored because don't blame ... i a Hinata lover but this is like WOW keep up the good work buena suerte (traduction : good luck) |
| GiantFishSquid 2008-01-26 ch 7, | abuseOMG I love this story. I can't wait till you update next. Are the kids going to become thieves though? |
| mars1394 2008-01-13 ch 7, | abusei love this story please up date soon!1 |
| mars1394 2007-12-21 ch 4, | abusethis story is awsome.you rock! |
| The Elven-Spear 2007-12-11 ch 7, | abuseOMG! THIS IS SO FREAKIN' AWESOME! |
| The Elven-Spear 2007-12-10 ch 4, | abuseGASP. Dude, the only time this happened to me was when I was 4, and my parents have been stingy with cash ever since. It's disturbing when you don't have any money. |
| CrazyChancyDreams457 2007-10-15 ch 7, | abuseNice plan! I love the storyline! I wonder what will happen in the time just to get attention will bring...Can't wait for more! |
| winged wondergirl 2007-09-29 ch 7, | abuseThis is an awsome story! I like how you included Hinata as the sort-of mastermind.In many stories, poor Hinata is a side character and doesn't get to do very much. |
| Lily 2007-07-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseWah. I have summer school now. 3 hrs a day 4 days a week. Jeezus. This story kinda brightened me up though |
| IMV-Runo Masaki 2007-07-01 ch 7, | abuseplz update soon |
| fruitsbasketangel 2007-06-30 ch 7, | abusecool story! |
| KougaAndKagomeForever 2007-05-20 ch 7, | abuseHee Hee, Shrek the third... Ah, Storm-sama!I hope your nto implying Shino-Kiba! >.> You will turn Hinata into a Fujoshi!! (A Fujoshi is an otaku girl who likes... Yaoi...) And yes, it was... episode 218-220. Ino feel's bad after getting 'wind-bitch slapped' heheh, and Temari's not even the one wind-bitch-slapping her. :P I know some of the filler's are crappy, but I enjoy my nice little fillers with Kiba and Hinata (Or just Kiba, w/e) My favorites would be 148-150, 184, 196-204 and the last 4 episodes (216-220) Werent that great, but they wre nice character development things to watch. (mostly of the sand ninja, but you get to see Kiba And Hinata too..) Ew, Orochimaru is loose in the world, and Kiba/Hinata (Oh... And Sakura...) Are all alone... No!! Go away Orochimaru! You have teh evil tongue of doom!! T.T Also: I remember when you wrote about Kiba reading Old yeller, he cried about them shooting him. I haven't read the book, (Yet..) But the disneyt adaptation(in 1957, Disney wasn't all that child friendly...Or racially friendly...) But I basically learned about the whole book! Kiba should have found comfort in having Old yeller's Son still live :nod: I think... Well, that's 90% Of my thought-proccess Yesh! I knew if I was dilligent in my prayers- Er... channeling... Master- err... Fanfiction writer Storm would write again! :D -'It took ino a few moments to realize she had to dial '9-1-1' for emergency' :O |