Ah, I accidentally skipped that one two. For whatever reason, it's very easy to miss.

Loved the fic, it was very, very good. Everyone was perfectly in line. *applause*

I know! I somehow skipped that bit in the game! But I was writing a fanfiction and I was looking how to spell Maechen because I'm trash at spelling and I randomly picked some part of the online script and saw it. My eyes totally bugged- I'm all "how in seven hells did I miss that?" so evil.

Cuteness! I loved how you put it.

A fic-starved Lukka fan,

-Kuris-

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Very good! I enjoyed it a lot!

I, too, missed that scene with Luzzu my first play through. I did get it the next time, though. XD

I really liked this. It was a nice filler. Closes that little black hole Square leaves open. Very nice job. The ending was cute. I enjoyed reading. .

I must say - I didn't expect all that much when I clicked this link, but I'm glad I did in the end. Simply put, this is an excellent filling in of the blanks - you took a piece of canon and skillfully weaved the story around it. Everyone was IC and expanded on, and I love the ending line.

It's hard to put into words exactly what I like about this story so much - it's simple and not terribly in depth, and that's the appeal to me. It feels like a scene in the game we missed, and fits in so nicely with the feel of the game. I'm particularily impressed with the way you wrote the scene around the FMV of Wakka and Lulu arguing - the dialogue felt so natural that it took me a few seconds to even notice you were quoting!

Thanks for writing it.

- Parron

Hehe, this was an enjoyable read. Just enough humour to balance out the angst, really. I especially liked the ending. xD;;