And the plot thickens!

But you never said what Sarah did to change the timeline back...

Still reading, but this sounds like off to a good start, even though I was momentarily confused.

It was good, but just a little too fast paced.

one little thing:

Write the year/location thing [2015:] differently. It reads like a script when you format it that way.

Great use of the characters, by the way.

Neat story. I especially like the Terminator reference, considering the girl's name is Sarah!

Pretty boaring, draged on.

I like it keep updating.

A pretty good story. Continue.