There are not enough people in the world that think like you do. I admire this piece.

That was actually really, really good. Kudos

Aww! Well, of course one sees that coming (meaning Gatsby's death) but still...it's sad to see him go. I really liked the imagery especially when you said about the leaves falling into the pool and none of them being green. Haven't read "The Great Gatsby" in awhile but it's good to go back to it. Good job.

I just finished reading the Great Gatsby for my English claas, and your story helps me with Gatsby's death.

It was a very good. It makes me understand the story even better the way that you wrote it. You're a good write.