Reviews for The Consequences of Falling

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andy 2008-03-20 ch 13, anon.	abusegah! This is a great story, definitely have me hooked. Unfortunately I didn't read the incomplete part before I read it and I am now left wanting to read more. Please continue!
Jenna 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a great story, update soon!
ninz 2007-04-30 ch 13,	abuseHi Maria! OMG - the story gets more and more exciting. Plz update as soon as you can!
SallyJetson 2007-04-29 ch 13,	abuseYou are weaving it all together here and I get the sense that the nanny is 'somewhat' involved in the kidnapping of the child as is Paul Ford but in a totally different way. Sam's involved in the kidnapping as well... if I'm not off base. Tight emotion in the first scene among Danny, Jack and Martin. Martin's dad is obviously going to bat for the wrong guy!
anmodo 2007-04-29 ch 13,	abuseGreat writing. Loved Jack's realization of Danny's true feelings for Sam. You're creating a fascinating puzzle here. I can't wait until the picture becomes clearer. Great job.
ukeleleboy 2007-04-29 ch 13,	abuseWow, this are three stories in one. Emotion with first time, interesting the second one, intrigued and scared the third one, and I'm starting to think that child is linked with the case?? Well, I hope Jack remembers Henderson's case and they find out where is Sam,... or Sam gets to escape with the child or... wow... Ican't wait for more! Update soon, please.
twin*muse 2007-04-15 ch 12,	abusethis is just a little weird for me... AWESOMELY fantastic story line though... just... odd for my Smarties4life heart. :P
twin*muse 2007-04-15 ch 3,	abuseblink blink whoa... didn't see that one coming...like REALLY didn't. ehm...I SO can't picture Danny and Sam. At all. Ever. I don't think that notion ever even crossed my mind cause...they're SO like brother/sister. Gutsy. :D
twin*muse 2007-04-15 ch 1,	abuseo...I'm soo hooked! Awesome opening! NEXT! ...
ninz 2007-04-11 ch 12,	abuseOh! New chapter! That's great! Now please continue soon and have Danny and Sam reunited so they can live happily ever after! ;-)
anmodo 2007-04-11 ch 12,	abuseSo many twists and turns. This is great. And I loved that you ended it one a flashback to Danny and Sam. It reminds us of the intimacy between them that explains their feelings now. Well done.
ukeleleboy 2007-04-11 ch 12,	abuseHey, that was great, I love the tension between them, I like a lot Sam's memories. I hope the boys goes through hell to find her :-) Continue please and update soon.
SallyJetson 2007-04-10 ch 12,	abusequote-Charlotte Ford, aged 6. Just after 7:00 this morning her Nanny, Ruth Barnes, was in the process of getting her ready for school when she heard a noise. She turned around to see two masked figures behind her and that’s the last she remembers until she woke up. It looks as if she was chloroformed.’ This just gives me a funny feeling! I love how you write Sam's thoughts about Danny. It was hot and sweet and tender! But I particularly like this part of her thoughts quote-She had always been so scared of falling in love, unsure that she could ever accept the consequences of loving someone and not have them love her in equal measure, but with Danny it had happened so quickly there had been no time to be scared. 'the consequences' -- very key words there. quote-All she could hope was that he had told Jack about her reference to the Henderson file in their conversation. It was the only help she could give them in finding her. Oh and I am hanging once again!
snowstargirl 2007-03-26 ch 11,	abuseI'm so gald you updated! And that Sam was able to talk to Danny. Please update again soon!
anmodo 2007-03-26 ch 11, anon.	abuseYah! A new chapter. So glad you haven't abandoned this story. I'm dying to find out where you are going with it. Great developments here. And well-played dialogue between Danny and Sam during the faux conversation.

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