So, sweet! More, please?

"It almost could have been mistaken for a trendy, metropolitan kiss, that sort of chaste, meaningless greeting that was just becoming popular again. Crowley almost could have waved it off as nothing…except that this was Aziraphale, who was in no way trendy at all"

What a lovely--and so appropriate--way of saying it. You capture so much in one line: Crowley's confusion, Aziraphale's lack of trendiness, the sweetness of the moment, and the promise of friendship about to evolve into more.

LookitDom: That really was very good. Loved how it ended. And I just imagined Crowley's expression in the end as a sort of '._.' thing, made me giggle, sounds girly but I did giggle.

This is excellent! I really like it :)

Superb. Though it was short, both Crowley and Aziraphale came off as perfectly themselves. Your style is lovely and I enjoyed every word. And, of course, it was completely adorable, and made me "Aww" out loud. Excellently done.