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sugarbowl99
2009-06-03 . chapter 8
How about this...?
Ed and Al... er... they hang around the mansion and do crazy and random schtick with the mutants, like... they teach Ed about the technology of this time period. They introduce Ed to computers, maybe to YouTube, and Ed is so frightened (of course Al is equally as startled, but he does a better job of hiding it) that he punches the computer into oblivion and so forth.
I'm sorry, but it's summer, and I'm not feeling imaginative...
Moondapple
2009-01-02 . chapter 8
hmm well his memorys could be taken by the gate as a price for coming here and he keeps losing them b/c the gate keeps coming back to take them again ...you sould have a verry angstsy scean were all sees the gate and eds screaming and then when he wakes up he doesntremember anything

also maybe you could have that is they go back to were they came in to this world and do alchimy there that they can go back though i think you would have to have a price...

if you want anymore help PM me please ill be glade to! ^-^
you can also PM me if youjust want to talk b/c talking is fun!XD

good luck and cant wait till the next chapter comes out!
-Moondapple
DemonRaily
2008-10-04 . chapter 8
Don't have any ideas, but dance thing sounds interesting...
You said that you don't have any ideas, but you really just listed few, and they not that bad!
Synneofthesun
2008-10-03 . chapter 8
So you want ideas, huh?
I'll just list a bunch random ones then, 'k?
Envy shows up
Ed gets sick (flu like)
Some other random FMA character gets stranded there too.
Someone else is kidnapped
Ed helps some other mutants pull a prank
Some of the teen mutants take Ed and Al to the town (there's one near by, right?)
Katie drag Ed and/or Al to the mall
There, not very original, I know,but... whatever.
Psuedonymph
2008-10-03 . chapter 8
Ok, lets see confirming this, you are going by the FMA manga and the X-men movies. There are several other kids Ed and Al's ages if you read New X-men: Academy X. There is a girl, Noriko Ashida, who looks like she had metal arms. Look her up on the marvel wikia and try to read the books.
QuitexSoul
2008-10-03 . chapter 8
i like the school dance idea.
though i hate to see poor lil Al angst it up, but its always awsome when Ed feels awkward lol. hehe.
thanks for not killin the story!
^_^
Shadewolf7
2008-10-02 . chapter 8
No Romance is a good idea. I'll PM you with ideas, but I need to re-read the story first. Romance makes things SOO much more complicated, and, well... difficult to write stories do not need any more aspects of difficulty added.
animefreak892cool4u
2008-06-19 . chapter 7
love the story. can't wait for the next chapter.
Edward-Elriclover1
2008-05-11 . chapter 7
Please Update!
Synneofthesun
2008-04-11 . chapter 3
Great chapter!
Can't wait to read the rest!
Synneofthesun
2008-04-11 . chapter 1
Hm...
This crossover really works.
Awesome story!
If you ever deside to up-date, I'll deffinately read & review!
Suuki-Aldrea
2007-10-01 . chapter 7
Cool! Update soon please! Ja ne!
ehxhfdl14
2007-09-28 . chapter 7
No one notices Scott rolling his eyes...XD
Wow, you're updating a cr*pload of stories lately O-O Awesome :D
AkitaFallow
2007-09-27 . chapter 7
Yay, update! I lost the stream of this story in the last few months... I think I'll go back and read all the chapters again, but right now, I don't have the time (it's late, I have school tomorrow!) Good chappie! I like the alchemy, and the memory loss will be explained, I hope!
Shadewolf7
2007-09-27 . chapter 7
I know the feeling... though I've not got 20...
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