That was beautiful and enchanting and made me want to cry dammit! But it was wonderfully written and I thank you for sharing this.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

This is a lovely, subtle piece. Fantastic.

I don't know if this is the end or if there is more, but either way, you've aquired a new fan in me. Thank you.

i sincerely hope you continue this story...i had goosebumps while reading it :)

I like it. I'm sotty I'm not very good at giving reviews, but I like this story.

"humanity was a most seductive mistress" WOW! As I read this story I was struck by the beautiful way you use words to paint a picture. It's amazing and I wish I could write like that. This is a beautiful and sad story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Your detail is like an exquisite portrait that is so beautiful it almost blinds you. This is so unbelievably well written it's almost impossible to comment on. New words need to be created just to describe the sheer feeling that I felt after reading this. It's like being born into the world, you see everything in a blinding light because it is so far beyond anything you've ever seen before. That's how I felt after becoming completely infatuated with your writing!

That was one of the most personal sounding stories about Lois and Superman that I have ever read. I do hope you consider continuing the story and showing how this makes Clark and Lois act at work

oh no, it can't stop here!
please, write more! :)

One word: Incredible!
and just so beautifully, beautifully written.
and so sad
and so romantic
wow!

Just to let you know, I finished reading this with a happy smile on my face. That last part was just so sweet, just lovemaking, not smut like at all, which to me makes it a more beautiful act.

I like that you had her go find him, kinda like she was stepping onto his turf, and in that he had no choice but to be honest with her. I felt like I was in the living room with them.

Great imagery. Great story. Thanks for that. You made my day.

Wow...
I'm currently at work, having a lazy day (bad girl :D)and was surfing on FFN to find a good SR story to read. I remembered reading the first part of your story, thinking it was just a one shot, and was happily surprised to discover you posted two new chapters!
And I wanted to tell you how fantastic it is, I can say I read a bunch of SR story, and none of them have touched me the way your story did. You did an amazing job with the characters of Clark and Lois, the way they are, they feel, it was just incredibly real and powerful. No hysterical Lois, no self pitying Clark, and just two adults dealing with their feelings, thank God, you got them right!! Word after word, it was making sense, and I could totally imagine this to be the next chapter in their lives.
I really hope you will post more parts in this wonderful story, but even if you stop here, thank you so much for taking a little trip in the fanfiction world(from what I read in your profile ;)...), and sharing your talent with us.

Marie.

PS: forgive my English, I'm French :D