Amazing. Dark but well written.

This is just... wow. I love it :)

A great story. Very good.

In a strange, twisted way, I liked that. It showed Rogue's resolve and loyalty realistically -- well, as realistically as could be guessed at -- in a horrible situation. I think you also portrayed John wonderfully, a traitor to the X-men but only to a point. A sequel to this would be amazing, showing the reactions of the other X-men to Rogue's state and John return, maybe?

FreeDaChickens

great story. i felt so much for her! good oneshot. yeah i think u shud write a follow up to it. as oppose to another chapter. makes more sense that way. kudos!

I've read this one several times now and I have to say well done! Bravo! I think it's one of the most realistic Rogue/Pyro fic I've ever read. I'd really like to see it continued!

-Ally

Wow.This was really good.I really enjoyed this.Especially since it was so dark.

on behalf of ryro shippers everywhere, please continue this story.

Scary! What a scary story! And yet... I loved it. It felt like the worst didn't come, she's safe, everything will be okay someday. Though not in the near future. Follow up story ideas... uh, you could try to explain the events around the battle and the battle its self, but I agree, it's better this way.

wow! that was intense!! i loved it ^.^
please! continue the storii!!
i love how u described every little detail!!

Love it!

I dunno, maybe Pyro taking her back to get all healed up. Pyro falling hopelessly in love with her... I dunno. :)

Dark, very, but good none the less.

L

wow! this is powerful stuff!
I would love to read more, and if you continue this, i'll read!
^_~
x DT

Beatiful. Really, I love stories like this and there aren't many dark Ryros out there. Which is shameful, after all, John's character is perfect for these kind of fics.
It just disgusted me the way Sabretooth and Logan (if I'm not unmistaken), took advantage of her. The physical pain is already bad but poor Rogue, the rest of the humiliation was awfully unbearable. I guess I'm just too much against men who use sexual pleasure as something to prove themselves even more, to be able to enjoy the small bits of this story that revolved around it.
But this one-shot is love. Awesome, so glad you decided to post it. The last part was really moving and not one bit OOC. I don't have much more to add, I guess. Really great. And I think you can just leave it like this, it works. Or you can post another chapter, maybe one that shows us where John took Rogue, what happened to her and how it ends? I dunno, just a suggestion.
You should write more like this one. The emotion, all the things flowing through her mind.. We can really feel what she feels. Somehow. And that is good if you can't tell ;) Again, brilliant fic.

Wow!

This was so full of emotion. When you said this was dark, you weren't kidding. I admire how you wrote it and moved me. Yeah, you made me feel like Rogue, feeling everything she went trough.

And what you decide to do, keep it as one shot or continue it, it won't matter, because this piece is incredibly great.