I agree with the previous comments..
Please don't stop here! This story's really beautiful..
And you write really well, it's amazing how you brought out the character's emotions so clearly. Awesome (:

OK,I had to re-read this one. All I can say is: damn! That's harsh! Great story!

This story rocks! It is so sad and very well written. ! I had to leave review.

Oh great. I'm always late. But better late than never. I love the way you write seriously. This is something I can imagine happening. Keep up the good work and don't ever stop writing. Cheers :)

That was.. so beautiful...

...-Is floored.-

Well, I found this at LJ first, and I still dunno how everything works around there, so I hunted it down here and added it to my favorites. ^^

It's so completely *beautiful*, and it's such an Oshitari thing to do...he's gorgeous and smart and he /knows/ it, so he takes advantage of it. -.-; And Gakuto's response is completely IC, I could picture this entirely in my head.

I could feel the resentment and anger with Gakuto, the betrayal with Oishi, the disbelief with Kikumaru, and last but not least, the desperation from Oshitari. I thrilled in every second of it; I haven't read something so well-written in months.

We need more writers around her like you...

With Love,
`Jewelieishness

Magnificent! Heart-breakingly wonderful.

You made use of such intensely emotional imagery... it's... WOW! Words will never be enough! Absolutely magnificent work!

aww~
that was sad..
good fic though. ;p

so sad...how about a sequel?

Oh, wow.
This was just stunning.
By the end I was seriously choked up.
Easily one of the best fics I have ever read.

Just.. fantastic.
Loved it.
Honestly, truly loved it.

gosh that was so... sad! i started crying! though it was really great! i love how you made the story! very unique!

Nice!

Oh wow. Beautifully written. I was devouring happy-happy OshiGaku fics whole afternoon, but this one made me stop and think a bit. Awesome work!

that's so sad. i love it! really really really love it! please make a epilouge or something? or is this a multichapter story!

but there is one part i dun get.. where was oishi and gakuto? where did yuushi come from? so was gakuto at Oishi's house then kikumaru came in, gakuto took a shower and left oishi's house and THEn somehow oshitari came from nowhere wit his clothes that he did not bother to put back on?

if that was so, why was gakuto there?

or was it

oishi at gakuto's house and kikumaru came in from nowhere, gakuto goes take a shower, oshitari comes back seeing no gakuto there because he had left?

if that is so why was oishi there? how the heck did eiji know oishi was there?

and for both scenerios, how did yuushi get his clothes and run after him, wasn't he at work or something?

yay. love this story. so sad. very. please... answer my questions... dyin to know here... D:

*sobs*
They're my favourite pairing from Hyoutei...
I've always imagined Yuushi to be a big flirt though~
Great fic! ^^