 Kairan1979 11/27/10 . chapter 1I liked the story. And the moral of it (Don't lie to Alfred)too! |
 KoiGirlPGSM 10/15/08 . chapter 1nice and funny! |
 jumpstarter 7/31/07 . chapter 1Awesome story!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON:) |
 rEd RoSe-StArFiRe-RoSeFiRe 10/14/06 . chapter 1wow this was such a touching story bit humour into it too i love it plz write more! |
 Rosadina 11/5/05 . chapter 1"laughs" Not the first time that I've seen this idea but still masterfully done. I loved the whole breaking into the tower scene, it really tickled my funny bone. Another story that is going in my c2 archive. |
 Mrs. Hermione Potter 7/30/05 . chapter 1Oh, please please please please write a story where he does call home! |
 Paper Bear 2/5/05 . chapter 1Awesome story! |
 ProfessorSpork 2/4/04 . chapter 1ROTFL! Alfred strikes again. Heh. Somehow, he manages to dust and cook his way into your heart. We love him. Another hit of a story, too. |
 Rocky and CG 12/21/03 . chapter 1Beautiful. Simple beautiful. What a very good moral it is too! |
 giveGodtheglory 12/20/03 . chapter 1Yay Alfred!
lol
God bless you. |
 Chastity 12/18/00 . chapter 1Hahaha! A devious Alfred - gotta love that guy. English 'tact' incarnate. :) |
 Starlight 12/2/00 . chapter 1 The way the characters were portrayed was beautiful. I find myself laughing out loud at nearly every story you write (simply because some of your stories *are* serious). I wanna know; how *do* you find the time to write? |
 Trinity Cross 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very good! |
 Ghostwriter 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Well-written, both in dialogue and characterization. I thought the solution to the bomber was cleverly done.
And Alfred's little "joke" was hilarious. |
 Sarah 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I've got to admit, I'm really not a big Kory fan...but this story almost made me change my mind. A wonderful piece of fanfic |