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Reviews for: Carefree
Starlightlovesya123
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
That was very well-written! An excellent analysis of both of the Sonics' character.
Great work!
bradhadair12
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
This was really good. Seriously. The differences between the two Sonic's, but the subtle similarities too, were really well thought out and described. It was an enjoyable read, and I couldn't help but snigger at a few points. Well done!

Bradhadair12
LightDarkandChaos
2009-03-18 . chapter 1
Nice look at Sega Sonic. I wouldn't mind it if more of this kind of crossover stories were around. Fleetway Sonic and Sega Sonic really are different, and they probably wouldn't be able to go for more than 3 minutes without an argument. And what are you willing to bet there's more confusion when Shadow finds out?
STaR Productions
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
S: That was fantastic! It didn't matter a jot that there was no explanation for this, the wonderful interaction made it almost completely unnecessary. I like how you highlighted all the little differences between them, but refrained from mentioning if one of them was 'better'. This fic gives a powerful message that no matter what, at heart, he's the same hedgehog.

I'll admit I don't know an awful lot about STC, but I know enough to know why STC Sonic is unwilling to remember Chaos... and not just the death of a friend, if I remember rightly.

By the end of the story I was grinning, completely unable to stop. Sega Sonic's infectious attitude certainly found a home in your writing! A very nice, simple tale, but packed with considerable thought.
Frozen Nitrogen
2008-07-02 . chapter 1
And here I am again, internet-wandering through archives.

I have to echo Sonicfan's sentiment; I thought the even-handedness of the story was fantastic. Kept SegaSonic sounding like a carefree idiot until 'the reveal' about Station Square; nicely done.

You skipped a trick at the start though; if Sonic's been through an interdimensional wormhole, you missed a golden opportunity to annoy the reader with paragraphs of NEEDLESS TECHNOBABBLE! ;D
O'doyle36
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this.
Sxueki
2007-06-17 . chapter 1
I'm terrible at reviewing, but yeah...

Interesting concept ^^ I love the way you can contrast and compare the two Sonics... ^^ hehe. Very cool.
Sonicfan
2007-01-10 . chapter 1
WOW. Just wow. This is quite possibly one of the best insights into the minds of STC and SegaSonic versions of the character. It's a little brief, but then, it's not like every fanfic has to be an epic. This sort of "Character Spotlight" can be just as good or even better. And this one short fic has said more about the actual CHARACTER of Sonic than several epics I could mention. It's impressive how you switch from humour (Sonic's short tempered reaction to his Sega version) to the kind of moment that can still bring a tear to my eye, like the part when Sonic is about to mention Johnny and then stops. And most importantly, while I was a little worried from the summary, you never portray either of the Sonic's as overly positive or negative. Rather than saying STC Sonic is the best! Or Sega Sonic is the best! you simply show them as two characters who have both faced huge challenges and dealt with them differently. (Liked the "pixel brain" reference to Tails. Brings back memories). And the ending is fantastic.
azngirlchibi
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good. It actually has a pretty good moral in it. I really enjoyed it!
Taranea
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
That was awesome! I think I know most versions of sonic but I could never really get myself to truly like the fleetway one. (the way he treats his friends is just MEAN, in my opinion^^)
but reading your fanfic i think that if you look at him that way he´s really understandable. I always wondered what would happen if those two would meet and at because i sorta skipped the prologue I didn´t know it was sega sonic he´d meet up with. but you wrote carefree sonic so well I soon recognized him and I think it´s a real great version of their meeting. where´s my favorites list?
blacKatDP
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
That was beautiful, Thal! Grr, though I wish youd finish your other stories first- I HATE SUSPENCE! That rant aside, I think its incredible how you capture their emotions like that. Its the reason why I love your stories! C ya,
Kat~
CarriePika
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
You know how much I love this story.

I just can't get over how well you wrote it! And the bit with the comparing of heights still cracks me up. XD *snickerfits* "I'm compact." Heehee!

It's a wonderful look at and take on the whole alternate versions of Sonic thing. And having them meeting like this?

Also, I -love- how you write Fleetway Sonic. I reallyreally do. He's so... so... rawr! Rawr~

Great job! Looking forward to the next little drabble that might show up~ =3
Kinzoku
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
That was good. I had never thought about that concept. I liked the complex interaction and mental evaluation.
Awdures
2006-12-17 . chapter 1
I love it. I've seen a couple of crossovers between universes but very few looking so thoughtfully at the characterisation differences.

The little details of the world and plot differences were nicely worked in, and the personality of the two Sonics was spot on.

A treat to read.
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