Wow, wild. I love Artemis' scewed (sp?) look at things. Interesting idea, very interesting.

< -.- > *sniff*
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That was deep.

I have a question. I want to know is Butler,Holly,Juliet,and the rest, what is their reaction to Artemis' (Fangirl sqweel) death(fangirl gasp)? other wise I LOVED you story please write more OK (this is the part where you say "yes" OK) thanks CU l8ter

Very well put together. Extremely good, in fact. Wonderful.

Evelyn

Guh, why didn't I review the first time I read it? WHY? WHY!?

Well, it's awesome and deep and touching and beautiful and if this was your first angst fic I am VERY jealous because my first angst fic was really bad... and I'll just stop talking now...

Sovrani

*sniffle* ;_; Oh this is wonderfull! Really really wonderful. ack! Just.. yes. Bravo. And all that.

Sob sob. Your fanfiction made me cry. Yeah, I know, I must have looked like a complete moron for crying at my computer screen, but what the hell. Anyway, I love your story. I think. Oh, and ny the way, you're really good at writing. Please write more, but not angst. They make me cry. (sob sob)

Not bad...I didn't read it to closely so I won't make detailed judgements. But I am fond of good angst. I was afraid you were going to make Artemis in love with Minerva, because that is a pairing I am completely against. After all, Minerva? Even the name suggests a MarySue/GaryStu pairing. If Artemis is paired with Minerva, it increases his GaryStu-ishness, which is already dangerously advanced. He cannot have an equal in intelligence, name, blah blah. It's just illogical. So I was glad Artemis thought of her as a threat rather than a love interest.

Wow. This was great. And so in character! That's exactly how our Arty would act.
I really loved the line: It took two to Tango, but he had never liked dancing anyway.
Brilliant.

Wonderful. Beautiful. Gorgeous, even. This story...I had never thought of Artemis thinking of that, but it does seem like something he would imagine...I would love a sequel, another chapter, anything, to perhaps reflect Butler and his family's thoughts. (Especially Butler's, I am a Butler fanatic. xD) You are a wonderful author, and I can think of no better critisism than to say you need t place the character's names in the story more often. Maybe. I can not decide if I would have liked it better that way or not...

-gasps- i am speechless... that was so deep... so so... unique
how you talked about Minerva being almost as smart... Artemis scared of her... or what it seemed... "It takes two to tango, but he had never liked dancing anyway." Minerva... Artemis... in this fic you showed why they could never be together... because they are too competitive... Artemis mostly... please, write more...

Your beloved evil friend, servent and fan,
Rox

Erk... I usually don't read angst but I think you did it pretty well, creepy though... Wow. Good one!

WOW. now IM jealous! *gasp* this was a real gem. in fact, im going 2 go c if i can nominate it for the orion awardz.

*leaves in shock*

Miracle of Nature...wow.

O.O...you know...that was great!...AND IT`S GOOD TOO...
i was kinda confused of the plot but still it`s great!!
you should make more!MORE!
*add to my alert list and fav too*