U know u should really make more chapters. Because I really liked the first one, it was very moving to tell u the truth(:Loved ur story so far! Update soonz pleaz.

-PockyKiss

I do believe this is the first KaZe fic on ff.n

Well... At least that's what the archive says...

Now to get on with my review. I loved the fact that it was angsty. Job well done here.

Sho sad TT

This just hit the spot, so good. I have to admit that I have a grudge against Yuuki because it's as if the whole world revolves around her. I love reading books and other things where characters tend to be more evened out and the spotlight isn't only focused on the main character. But that's only me... Anyways, I love the way you wrote the story, I like to imagine the narrator as a day class girl, but i guess it can be interpreted however one might prefer.

Aw! some Day Class girl has the hots for Kana-chan! Too bad he has Yuuki...

sounds like a girl (day class) is in love with kaname _

Really cute . not that i'll sadistic... Hihi

it's just that the fic showed emotions how painful it is to love but not be love thx for the fic

Is that...Ruka?

I dunno, I got 'male' from it my first time through. I like the imagery - well done!

OMG!

i absoulutely loved this-partly bacause i can relate to some-but besides tat, i absolutely love the way that you describe her passion. It makes me feel like i'm actualy in her head, feeling those emotions.

Very nice. Sweet. Who is narrating though? I'm too lazy to go and look.

{Two} I really like your writing style. I think that this was a really good fanfiction. {Thumbs up!}

I must say, this is by far on of the best one-shots I have ever read. There were so many emotions conveyed in that one small chapter, I almost couldn't handle it! I always love stories about obsession and odd feelings like that. This one is better than anything I have ever written, though. You did a really great job writing this. You should be so proud! I would love to read more of your stories. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.

-pl

This is very beautiful! I love everything about it!

Simply put, it was beautiful. You had a few grammatical errors and sentence structure errors but othe than that nicely written. Good use of imagery and I love the way you make it obivious and yet not, that it's Day Class girl in love with Kaname. Now if only it was a Day Class Boy...

perfeectly written, love the imagrey