demon!cliffhangers are badd! but good work

this is gona be funy good job

This is the 2nd time i read this one and it got chuckles out of me again. I hope to see another chapter; hearing those ANBU b*tch at each other is hilarious and seeing skika and Tayuya like this is funny as hell, too. I hope you haven't given up on this one...

Ugh, what cruel luck. I checked to see if you had updated this yet. . . and I got all happy. You see, I saw that it said it was updated august 25...but I didn't check the year *sigh* Well, I suppose I can keep checking up on it from time to time.

aww only one more chapter to go *sigh*

wonder when tayuya's plan to get shikamaru to be her boyfreind just to dump him in the end begins and fails(hopefully) after she get a gift like a new flute with a seal to stop the use of chakra within it.

_-any ways i did enough rambling time for short review before i read next chapter.


Tayuya's hair is it really pink? other fics have it as red

When is that braclet gonna get checked on?

0.o Shikamaru thought Naruto was cute ... that made me laugh

rating 1-10 -10 is highest

i give a 7.5 good but can be a little better

(no one ever gets past 8.5 anyway other wise disappointed if a rating goes down) =)

good story all in all

Suggestions-

1. make Yuya angrier, and less lady like a little more often. (I know, the plan thing, but...)
2. Ignore the past 15 or so suggestions.
3.It's hard to believe these guys are really ANBU. They're fine, that ones just a comment.
4. Do your best. Also your notes seem longer than some of your chapters. If you care to shorten them or lengthen the chapters. If it's not your style, don't ruin your groove. Good luck.

Okay, you need to update quick quick QUICK! XD
On a serious note however, I really like the story. It's well written (except for some typos here and there), and I especially like the twist the ANBU give to the story^^
Well done. I'll be keeping an eye on this story^^

Haraio

HEY!IT BEEN MORE THAN TWO WEEKS AND THE 6 CHAPTER!>_<

Sorry did't want to sound mean but a long time.

Oh i got some ideas .1.Make shikmaru and tayuya kiss by accident and make tayuya fall for shikamaru and shika feeling grow deeper.2 Because of the kiss ,make it hard for shikamaru and tayuya look at each in the eye.3 For the gift thing in chapter let shikamaru get her a flute and tayuya play it and shikamaru hear it and enjoy her song.4.Knowing it hard for them to looke at each other ,make one of them trip and land on one the other and they finlly look into each other and shikamaru find tayuya eyes beautiful and they didn't know wait they where doing and kiss long and hard and passioness and the best part they where in shikamaru room when one of them triped and on the bed!

Well that all i have now in let you know if i got some other ideas!Se ya shiko!

hey there i like the chapter a lot and hope update again soon!

HEY!>_<

sorry didn't want to sound mean but its be so long!TT-TT

UPDATE SOON!

yo!wuss up!graet chapter and can't eait for the love to start!

(stary eyes) o I love this one. Please continue >.< please, its giving me ideas to draw the shika tayu pair

Hey!I can't for the next chapter so update soon!

hey i a big shikatayu fan.i really love your story and i really like the part when shikamaru thought tayuya look attractive in chapter 4.

HEY IT BEEN LONGER THAN TWO WEEKS!WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 6!>_<

I'm sorry i don't want to sound mean but its be a long time.TT-TT

I want to read what happen next.By the way there a new shikatayu fanfic out its called "Instinct" nd it might give you some ideas!

UPDATE!