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| 9 T Kitsune 2008-08-31 ch 1,  | abusevery interesting take on the stupidity of team 7. brilliantly done. |
| Valentine Satiguss 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful telling of the cracks behind Team 7's bonds. I like it! |
| Seriously Yours 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. |
| Cantic 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. Very good portrayl of each character in realtion to each other. |
| Ariaeris 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseVery, very well done. This story was excellent and a very enjoyable read! I especially loved the last line, it was just perfect. Great job. |
| Strike Redkite 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like Sakura's view, and especially how she sees Sasuke as the main character because it suits her wishes to see him that way. And your last line is very, very well written and subtle. Good job :3 |
| obsessivesyndrome 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. Not a new idea but still enjoyable :D |
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseMaby it was the way this story was composed, or maby it was the haunting music I am listening too coupled with the grim outlook of this oneshot. Either way, you have done a fantastic job. |
| Riana1 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBrillant. |
| Krissy 2007-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the ending to Sakura's bit, about how time is moving forward but she isn't and she doesn't even realize it... My favorite, though, was Naruto's. Just cuz. BTW, I feel the need to read (and review, cuz that's how I show my love!) as many fics by you as I possibly can before I need to leave. Lots of love. |
| Aseret Kitsune 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseSo sad yet true for them all. Lovely characterization. Hope you won't mind me adding this to my C2. |
| Silva Wren 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThank you for the read - bye the bye I just read about three of your fics and they wre all amazings so congrats! XD |
| Lady Dusk -Raku- 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, extreme analyzing there. I loved Sakura's for some reason, not because she's not my top fav. character or anything, but because it fits extremely well in the view you described as hers. Keep the angst coming. You're a real master of it. |
| serenphoria 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why I haven't found you until now, your writing is quite stirring. There's a meloncholy mood that's set for this piece and the logic is all a little skewed, even the omnipresent voice, but then, it really enhances the how each puzzle piece is oddly formed and doesn't quite fit together. Naruto threw me off the most I think...a really awesome theory, but I don't know if I would buy that he would laugh histerically at the irony if he even recognized it. He can be quite thoughtful, as Tsunade noticed ^_^ I love how you closed it. That last line...it got me right here *sniffles* |
| Asuka Kureru 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuse"For most of his life he has been so lonely that even when Sakura and Sasuke are shoved towards him instead of coming by their own choice, he knows he will die for them." Ouch. I liked the bit with Sakura thinking that Sasuke is the main character. M, irony. XD Quite a pessimistic view, but at the same time, it fits with canon pretty well, and the prose is nicely written. Congrats. ^^ |