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| Tobias Bluesummers 2008-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseVery cute. It's interesting how you really don't know who the characters are until almost the end of the story, it's a nice touch. I like Shikamaru's attitude toward both his son's questions and Temari's tirade. It suits him very well. |
| Sashia Uchiha 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S PERFECT! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT |
| kiuna'yukina 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseHahaha, so cute! I love that you used the son's perspective.. XP |
| yumi-maki 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseLol. Oh my gosh, I love this fic. It's so cute and of course, so reminiscent of Shikamaru's parents but with that definite ShikaTema dynamic. I love Temari's responses - she tried so hard to be mad. lol - i really like this fic - it's clever. |
| Meshlena 2007-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe so cute! ^_^ |
| InosBane 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful fic! You made me smile tonight, thank you! |
| Rama Chan 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, that fic is ADORABLE! Im have reading all your ShikaTema fic...a little slow because my english is horrible, but thats histories of you are soo amazing! Thank you very very muth kisses |
| sakura-light-angel 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abusei really like your style for writing. Great work!! |
| Nuit Fleur 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseVery realistic for them both. XD Their relationship is so cute. :] |
| Star Burton 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseadorable, very cute. ^^ *faves* |
| NanoBear 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abusethis was so cute. for a moment i thought it was shikaku talking to shikamaru and shimaru has a sister..but nice twist at the end...aw shikamaru;s kids ^_^ |
| bakasai42 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Inspired concept! A perfectly cute scene, with just the right words. Bravo! |
| LightBender 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute! |
| Dexteria 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAh, it's not everyday you get to see a truly realistic futuristic (rhyming!) fic of Shikamaru and Temari. I love how the entire "why did you marry a such a troublesome" women is reanacted between Shikamaru and his son. And the chemistry between Shika and Temari at the end is a very nice ending~ Great job on this fic! |
| nostalgic-maiden 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseXDXD that was really good! at first, i thought it was shikamaru asking his father, but then i figured out (at the end) that it was shikamaru and temari (and their kids!) in the future...ah, silly me =) anyways, great job! |