ohmybuddha !

i loved it 8D
it was so cute and i lOvee Roxas ~!

i also love the pairing roxlette ;)

i loved the part where some random girl shouts out "hey! that guy's not romeo!" xDD

Wow. An amazing load of drama and realness. Well done. Faving it!

I thought it was really cute! Roxette ftw! :3
Good job!

aw... that's so cute!! I loved this, even though I'm not a HUGE Olette and Roxas fan, that was still an absolutely awesome story! I loved the ending line, and how Roxas beat Siefer to pulp hehe... Kinda depressing in the middle, but yay it turns out good in the end! yay! Anyways, keep up the good work!

♥zesty♥

OMG. You should see my left hand right now. It's all red and riddled with nail marks from me clutching it worriedly as I used the other hand to scroll down the page. Ow. Haha.
Anyway...WOW. Just wow. I posted a RomeoandJuliet!KH AU and I have half a mind to take it down now. You put me to shame. This is WONDERFUL. I love Olette's perspective, and Roxas is so...haha, omg, I love your Roxas. And OMG I was freaking OUT during the rooftop scene, OMG YOU NEARLY KILLED ROXAS!
And--and--! GAH. But I adore this so much. Great job!
Oh, and Roxette=♥

hey, this was really, really good!
I think if you changed the names from the Kingdom Hearts characters, you could actually turn this into an original short story.
5/5!

Wow!! This was phenomenal!!
I have to admit, when I first started reading I was totally expecting Roxas to be Romeo, and have the standard Romeo/Juliet thing going on... but this just blew me away! Seifer being Romeo made this fic break out of the ordinary...and be AMAZING!! I loved how protective Roxas was with Olette, and the ending was so cute.
Bah. You are a brilliant writer, and I'm sure lots of people say that, but it is so, so true.

n__n aww. this was UBER-CUTEHNESS.
it's a good thing you won the contest. your entry was muy cute. Roxette = otp. flw. anyhow, i liked the over all idea of this and the execution wonderful..

just, the last names kinda through me off. & when referrning to Selphie, you could have actually used her real name. Tilmitt. mhmm. well, anyhow, that doesn't matter much.

basically, that was the cutests ending ever. I just liked the whole think, and it made me "SQUEE". tee hee.

great job.

[favourites:

“Hey! That guy’s not Romeo!”
I laughed so hard then,
you should already know
this was the best thing in the world
it was amazingly awesome.
and i wanted to hit Olette so hard back there, but she made up for it :P
this was beautiful.
funny.
and a classic.
kudos for you.

This fic is so adorably cute x3 It's one of the best Roxette fics I've ever read. Mrs. Gerard's last name is My Chemical Romance's lead singer's first name XD Well anyways, *faves*

OHMYGODHOLYCRAP!

Oh my God. Oh my God.

I think...I love you.

Seriously, this oneshot (which I've finally, finally read) was amazing. Completely amazing. The sarcasm and humor made me giggle hysterically, the drama kept me on the edge of my seat, and the Roxette romance was so adorable. The ending...oh my god, to repeat myself. It was awesome. Insanely awesome. A definite favorite.

Freakin' awesome entry.

HOMG I JUST FELL IN LOVE...

{with your wonderfully wonderful fic}

this is the most well-written,
incredible, thoughtful fic
i have yet to read for my contest.

i can see now why it took you forever to write.

ily, seriously. this is amazing.

fantastic job && thank you very much for the entry.

[ LOVE ]

e XD THAT WAS SO CUTELY AWESOME, that's my little sis XD

hahaha aw i loved that ending, and that bit where that girl yelled out “Hey! That guy’s not Romeo!” XD

(hisses) dirty Seifer, he reminds me of malfoy, or however you spell it you must be his clone (or the hair o.O) lucky cutie Roxas saved Olette XD go emo kid

Roxas: (giving her cute glare) -.-

Olette:...m...I CAN'T HELP MYSELF (hugs him)

Roxas: ;_; er

Seifer: isn't this ro- (gets shoved off stage)

the little girl who yelled out before: -.- you're lam as romeo

Roxas: er, i call the role!

Sora/Hayner/Pence/and every other guy in the building: NO!

Roxas: ^^'

i loved this sis, adding to my favorites totally XD (throws you cookies) merry christmas la ^_^

AH! so very american-ish (is that the right way to put it) but SO SWET! AHH! roxas is so hot. wow.

i absolutely loved it. :]

-oath-

ohmigawd.
that was amazing.
it was so cute. the pairing & everything.