 CoolDiva 2006-12-17 . chapter 1Very cool. David Frank, huh? I see what you did there, LOL. It's was good to see that the "Kim and Tommy reunite" thing didn't happen for once. I kinda thought that that's what you would have happen. Glad ya didn't! (I love the couple and all, but, it's SO, SO, SO overdone, IMO). And Rocky with a business degree... nice change. It was cute how he wouldn't let her open the box. Very good job with the characterizations of the rangers. It was a very sweet and lovely story. R/Kat's getting to be a popular couple. My only real constructive criticism is that there were grammatical errors. (I'm kind of a nag when it comes to that sometimes, LOL)! But it happens! :) Overall, excellent job! Great writing debut. Cya. |
 zeopurple 2006-12-17 . chapter 1I really liked this fic, I thought it was well written. Though I tend to like Kat with Tommy, if I didn't pair them together I would definitely put her with Rocky. I loved how Rocky wouldn't let Kat open the ring box until she said yes or no. It was so cute how he doubted himself. Also, I'm glad that you didn't have Tommy go back to Kim after breaking up with Kat. For once, Kim actually chose to stay with the other guy and I liked that. This was a very good writing debut, I hope you keep it up and write more stories. |