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| Deluxe489 2008-06-20 ch 62,  | abuseGreat story, though I was kinda put off by the way you described Tahu near through the first part of the story -although he's not my favourite, it doesn't do you any good to portray him as someone he's not. Otherwise, great story; shame there's not a lot of Kopaka/Gali out there. |
| Lord's Girl Forever 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseHust so I can add to Favorites List |
| Lord's Girl Forever 2008-01-11 ch 11, | abuseI'm pretty sure that the Bionicle don't use paper, unless this is after the "Bionicle Legends". But if it was Hahli, Matoro etc would be Toa. Sorry, the storie's great, but I tend to be a perfectionist. Great story! :) |
| Lord's Girl Forever 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseOnua's answer in chapter three was really really funny. I read that sentence 3 times! |
| Foxyperv 2008-01-04 ch 14, | abuseokay this thing is great! sorry I didn't review first ^^; but I needed to ask: there's a hint of vakama/nokama right? XD |
| Kopali 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is the best story I've ever read! It's a very good story, but in the last few chapters, you need to watch your spelling just a little. No offense! :) |
| KxG 2007-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseO_O Oh my... AH *dies* thats me for- "I LOVED IT!" still dead |
| nightingale101 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Reality Obscured 2007-02-28 ch 62, | abuseI don't think I've ever read a fanfiction about Kopaka and Gali which has captivated me so. You've done a wonderful job! |
| Bioniclefangirl 2007-01-14 ch 62, | abuseAw... it's over :( Shame it was really good :D I hope your future fics are this awesome too ^w^ and the ending with the bet was really funnyd LOL :D |
| Bioniclefangirl 2007-01-13 ch 54, | abuseOh curds! O_O; Oh poor poor Kopaka and Gali... ;__; Update soon :D |
| dark raven0 2007-01-12 ch 53, | abuse"The demon stood up from the ground; golden-red eyes locking on to Malak" 0.o is Kopaka gone...forever??...don't do it! please I'm begging of you! -_- oh well, you know the script: the more angst the better, right? *points to a button that appears out of midair and reads: update* you see the button? FOLLOW THE BUTTON PLEASE!! |
| Arya-Metru 2007-01-12 ch 53, | abuse"...This was Vilak. The demon stood up from the ground; golden-red eyes locking on to Malak. The mouth split into a malicious smile. “Hello Malak,” it said, flapping its wings, “Are you ready to die?”" - one word: frick. |
| Far-Raiderz 2007-01-10 ch 51, | abuseWah lau, you update so quickly! The first time I saw this, it only had a few chapters! Now... Okay, I liked the rivalry between Tahu and Kopaka. I only wished you had more of it. |
| dark raven0 2007-01-07 ch 50, | abuse"She kicked the doorway hard enough to knock the blockage clear. 'Let’s go, Kopaka. If you get hurt, I’ll kill you!'" well now, isn't gali giving into some violent tendencies...run for the hills! ^^I STILL can't seem to read enough of your story, and that's saying a lot considering if the chapters go past 30, I usually quit reading...how long is this story going to be anyways? *shrugs* oh well, it doesn't matter, ^^ just keep updating! |