I'm looking forward to the sequel! I'm sure it'll be great!

Tres

I loved your story! So well written, well in character, very well described, I loved the wit and the humor! Had me constantly laughing out loud! The fight scenes were written very well, and I loved the message you included in the story. Overall, I simply LOVED it. And I also loved the slight Tokka. *is a big Tokka fan*.

Tres

Even tough it comes a little late, I want to congratulate you for this marvellous fan fic. Toph is my favourite character and your story made me like her even more. Keep it up! ^_^ *faved*

Pretty good. Not much OoC moments and the ending was just right. Good job.

Since the focus was more on Toph and Sokka, putting this story into that category would probably get the more reviews this deserves.

Tutti bravi! I like this!
-Thanks,
-Albus

Hey there! Lauren here. I hope you're doing well. This story was amazing! I can't think of enough words to describe how wonderful it was! Everyone was in character, especially Sokka! I was laughing at some of the things Sokka said! And like Toph, I too was picked on for being visually impaired, but those experiences have made me stronger. And it's the people who can't see me for who I am that are truly blind. I see with my heart and that's the best source of sight God could have given me. I thank my Heavenly Father for that gift every day. I would really like it if you read my Avatar stories and reviewed them.
I'm going to read some more of yours! And if you want, we can chat on MSN Messenger! You can find my sn for it on my profile here. If you don't have MSN Messenger, it's easy to get and free. Just download it at msn dot com. Just change the words to symbols. Then once it is downloaded, all you have to do is register an e-mail address with it.
Remember, God loves you!
Lauren

Very nice. Very nice, indeed. =D

I really hope your friend liked this and got the message in the story. I think it's awesome that a friend inspired such a lovely story. ^__^ I enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to more from you.

Well the chapter was good but I noticed some things you could fix.

Lets start with this

(Even more surprising was the fact that he still had an arm wrapped around her sleeping form)

Sleeping Form?

I think you could of used a better word then sleeping form.

Here's number two

(we’ll take them all with us back to the Fire Nation where my father can do as he sees fit)

Would Azula really say what her father sees fit?

She's the type of person who is a leader and she would take matters into her own hands or force her father to do what she wants.

So that was a little out of character but other then that the rest of the chapter was good.

WoW!
that was by far a good chapter
great job.

If your lucky I might teach you the kamaya kaymaya wave
good job!!

Alright... but I'm not a good patience person... but I'll try. I do like qaultity afterall... but I hope it comes soon.

YEAH! I'm glad for the email, at least I know it will be out... again I hope soon but I do like quality... but I like quickness too!

Haha, I'll wait for now but I can't stop my slef from getting impatiant, we'll have to see.

Hurry it up then, the first chapter to Sokka's Stubborn Steak should be out now... SO WHERE IS IT!!

Sounds good. I'll be looking forward to it.

Just to mention it, my computer died last night, so don't take offense that if I don't submit any reviews for several days/a week. Keep up the great story-telling! Can't wait for a sequel. :)

Sweet, looking forward to it!
~Jelly Bean

One ittle bitty thing...where did Sokka get the club from?

XD It is fine...it just took a while longer than the rest of him & his stuff to fall to the ground!


I really liked this story, and I'm glad I read it, since it is sweet and fluffy and yeah, I need to go to sleep now.

Now I will contemplate whether or not I will read Napu's Purpose...not tonight though, I am way to tired.

Toph and Sokka are cute together like they are here. Just the pre-teen stuff like how they react when the woke up. It adds a certain believability to the whole story.