it's nice i suppose ." but im more of a tifa x cloud fan. and i also saw a review u gave an author of their cloud x tifa story, u GTFO! if u don't like the pairing like it says on ur profile then y'd u read it ms. hypocrite!

very well written, and sweet too :D

awesome story!

Great story. Oh so sweet.

that was cute and short. X3

Sweet fic. Glad to see you've got more Cleris on the way! Cloud x Aeris forever!

This is sweet, but if you don't mind me saying so, it struck me as rather cliche. Perhaps it's the idea, perhaps it's the style of writing.

The prose overall is too cluttered. I think it would be more effective pruned down a little. Like this for instance: 'He lie down, his eyelids fluttering shut over his blue orbs.' Firstly, I think that should be 'He lay down', secondly you call his eyes 'orbs' (an overused and unnecessary replacement word) and thirdly I think it would read better if you shortened it. Why not just say: 'He lay down and closed his eyes'? Sometimes simple is best.

Really, really nice, this one. Thumbs up.