wicked two chapters! so is byron aslo a mutant os something and is visions the only power natalie has? cant wait to read your next chapter soon!

when will u update next?

Really cool! I was wondering...could you give an overall description of them?Thank you! Haha. I think i can imagine them as a couple already! Please update soon!

_ I think it's a great start. I can't wait to finish reading it.

oh, intriguing! More! very good start, but too short. more!

Keep on goin... it's pretty good so far...

So far, so good. I like it.

this is getting interesting.

poor kid. i feel so sorry for her. what will happen next?