 paprika90 3/13/04 . chapter 2wicked two chapters! so is byron aslo a mutant os something and is visions the only power natalie has? cant wait to read your next chapter soon! |
 marcy213 5/26/03 . chapter 2 when will u update next? |
 MistressOfFate 4/12/03 . chapter 2Really cool! I was wondering...could you give an overall description of them?Thank you! Haha. I think i can imagine them as a couple already! Please update soon! |
 Allison 10/6/02 . chapter 2 _ I think it's a great start. I can't wait to finish reading it. |
 Anubis 6/26/01 . chapter 2oh, intriguing! More! very good start, but too short. more! |
 Sorceress Knight To lazy to sign in 6/25/01 . chapter 2 Keep on goin... it's pretty good so far... |
 dxinsider 6/25/01 . chapter 2 So far, so good. I like it. |
 realm 6/25/01 . chapter 2 this is getting interesting. |
 realm 6/24/01 . chapter 1 poor kid. i feel so sorry for her. what will happen next? |