wow this was a really good story!
i really liked it
the only thing i have to say is about your spelling
to put it bluntly: it was aweful
but it didn't ruin anything about the story which is good
loved the whole idea

LOL! You are so going on my favorite authors list. I love you that much.

well... i would say spell-check, but that would give the impression that you should try again... and you really shouldn't. When I read this, your horrible terrible horribly terrifying piece of shit fiction killed off a piece of my soul. It was that bad. So please, think of all those other poor souls out there (I.E. future victims) and break both your hands.