This is almost sickeningly mary sueish.

:}} Yes I remember now! ANd the sequel! Excellent stories!

OH Draco gets romantic... And a little whimpy! I'm glad you put that part of him in this story because that side isn't really shown in the books, except the 6th. :}

Is it grawp? Hmm? Good job on your stories, mate! AND I love pocky! lol

I remember this story! I liked it alot, I think.

Hey, Ima's sis. You spelled "grammar" incorrectly. Why should she listen to you?

Dude, your review makes me want to commit ritualistic suicide. If you're going to be a jackass to someone else, at least make sure you have the intelligence to talk down to the person. If you can't give constructive criticsism, then shut the hell up. Why did you bother reading it? Do you think you're funny giving this girl shit? Call me a hypocrite, but we are all hypocrites, so you have no right to point the finger. You can't even succeed in writing a legible review, what right have you to flame her?

Please, do yourself a favor and delete this story. It will save you from getting flames. First of all, as soon as i saw that it was in second person i balked, i hate when people use second person in their stories. Also, you have a few grammer and spelling mistakes. Thirdly, you need to rethink the plot, this would never have happened. And i must agree with one of the other reviewers, the Weasley's do not need anymore chilren. I'm sorry if this was so harsh, but it's the truth and you need to face it.

dude i looked at your profile hoping to find that your horrible shit fic was a one time thing and i found this. I almost killed myself when second word in. It's STARE not STAIR you dumb jackass. Jesus bloody christ. No one reads your shit but me, and i feel like commiting ritual suicide, meaning cutting and L into my abdomen with a iron katana and letting myself bleed to death as my intestines rupture and my stomach acid eats through into my lungs. By all that's holy, please stop.

I would advise against second person. It makes everything feel like a "choose your own ending" book. There are some spelling errors as well. And do the Weasleys really need any more children? The long lost child thing is very cliche, not to mention difficult to pull off.