So...cheesy, yet so...god! She's quite the Mary-Sue, but I love Mary-Sues! It certainly kept me in stitches that I actually couldn't guess what happened! And there was a plot, but the only thing that seemed realy awkward would have to be the no house placement thing. That didn't feel quite right to me for some reason. But it was relatively very well written, and it was certainly commendable to keep the plot believable and keep us guessing at the same time while coping with a MS! That's quite a load to handle, bravo!

Very original idea, I like it. I think you should give more background info on Vina though.