Great story! I usually don't read that many Dick/Robin stories, but this was very well done.

so was bruce playing a farce this whole time? deliberately misleading dick abt. who he was? or showing his true self?

hope ariadne is alright... wondering how kids' scheme to be batman's helpers is going to factor into this story...

ok... bruce sleepwalking and doing laundry? hilarious! so he actually does his own laundry?

ooh... i don't anything abt. the canon... was not expecting that... so sad...

on another note, can't wait for alex and bruce to get to being on the same page at some point, coz the way this is going, he's gonna be accusing him of child abuse pretty soon...

oh my gosh, i love the outsiders! i read that book so many times i lost count!

ha! i didn't expect alfred to turn on them, or alex to think of recruiting him :) nice job...

aw... i love the interactions between the brothers... even tho hector was kinda scary when he threatened T...

ha bruce irritating alex is almost as good as him fighting with cecilia :) so he was paying attn to the chess game afterall? or not...

will cecilia ever feature in this story? i miss her...

aw i love the scene of ariadne and her brothers... and the mom as well... what a sweet family...

o can't wait to see what's in store for dick... poor guy...
tho you would think either bruce or alfred would realize that he's too determined/stubborn/driven to give in / give up? given that they know him the best...? no?

i love dick's review of the frost poem :) haha it doesn't even rhyme :)

are the ch. titles modelled after c.s. lewis's books? i know i recall that format...

o... batman mad! scawry... well, they better find their way out of this one, coz alfred and dick did the right thing... they just gotta convince bruce of it...

oh...exciting

Why are your stories so addicting? Geez, I've spent days now reading your stories.(proof that I really have no life, or that you're just really good at writing these stories...I'd rather think the latter)

SOMERVILLE'S COMING BACK?! YES! That is so awesome. I was hoping she'd make it into at least a tiny bit of one of these chapters, but I guess not. It was still amazing. I can't wait to see Dick finally pick out a name for himself, and then go out in full costume with Batman.

I think one of my favorite parts of this last chapter was when Bruce came to visit Alex, and he realized that the billionaire's isn't as dense as he first thought him to be. I rather like Alex. Hopefully he'll be appearing in the next story from time to time.

Gordon and Batman's encounter was intense. I like how Batman mentioned that he was there at the funeral, and that he had a son. I guess Gordon never realized that even the Dark Knight is human.

On to the next story! :D

I am completely blown away by your writing. It's simply wonderful. How you write every single character, not only precisely, but believable. I still love how you incorporated Dick Grayson into this universe (and Barbara Gordon of course).

Holy ** your writing is so frickin' good. Characterizations, plot, descriptions, even the OC's are awesome! I wish I had more to say, more to offer, but there's nothing I can think of besides the compliments I given you.