This is also very wonderful. I hope that at some point you get a chance to finish it.

this is a great story, really well written. i would really like to see how it ends and whats up with that creepy card. update soon Please

I agree with the other reviewers I've read. I really like your story and would welcome an update. You have a nice sense of plot and I'd really like to know what's up with that creepy card!

*In a mysterious, entrancing voice* You want to update! You want to write some more!

I've decided that I'm gonna start bugging you to update both this story and "Uh - No!" at least once week. My theory is that I'll drive you to insanity so that you have no choice but to update! Muahahahahahahaha!

*sigh* an update would be nice :S? I've really got to keep checking the completed status. Eh well, it was fun so far!

This is a really interesting story, there are so many possibilities and I am curious to find out whodunnit :)

I really hope that you're planning on updating this soon. It's much too good to be left hanging!

is there any chance that this story will be completed or have i gone and got myself hooked on another unfinished story? who attacked daniel and why? if you cant' finish the story can you at least send me an answer to those questions? my e-mail is . please, please! i know i'm pitiful, i'm also extremely frustrated when a story isn't complete. i'll even get on my knees and beg( and jack isn't the only person with bad knees) please!

please please come back to this story and finish it. i don't do well when i get hooked in a story and it just gets left unfinished. here i am totally involved and suddenly the story just stops. i know its an old story but please come back and finish it. please please please!

I really enjoy reading this story so are you planning on finishing this story? You were doing a great job. So can we expect chapter 7 any time soon?

Thanks, Teri

No, you can't leave it like that! We don't know who did it yet or why. Please, please continue...soon !

I'm really enjoying this story and it's been a long time since you've updated it. I keep checking back... I think you've done a great job bringing in "outside"characters and intertwining them with our heroes. I'd love to find out why Daniel was attacked, what's up with the creepy card...all of it! Please continue!

I really hope you finish this some day, I think this is
the second this I've read it. Are you still writing do you intend
to finish it. I hope so, it's really good. It be great to know
who was trying to hurt Daniel.

Just wanted to remind you that I love this story and would love to see more as soon as you are able. It appears that I can only leave one review per chapter so you need to write more so I can review more. ;)

I love the detail you use in the development of the filing part of the story and when dealing with Daniel's medical situation. And now of course, there's the creepy card... Please, please write more so I can review more. ;D

Laura