Great fic!

Ahahahaha! OMG, it's perfect! Ahahaha! Ow, my side. Classic. Epic. Yay for Yuuko! Psycho Witch of Doom!

Your writing is fantastic! I know I sound like some sort of gushing lunatic, but I've enjoyed reading your stories so much! It's like sifting through piles of shat and finding a gold nugget inside! Infinitely worth it. Thank you for writing this one, too. I'm starting to regain hope for humanity! And the Internet! (Well, let's not go too far...) ^_^

-Kayura

"The archer’s eyes seemed to cut through him, slicing away all the layers of protection as easily as his arrows sliced spirits from his thought that maybe he knew what it felt like, now, to be on the other end of one of those arrows, dying in a pure burst of light."

I felt my brain atrophy there for a minute, but then I realized that a couple of words were probably chopped off. ^_^;

And yay for confession! I like how you added the "he'd see through lies" thing, because even though I'd thought the same thing, I couldn't believe he didn't stupidly try it, anyway. But I guess Watanuki has matured enough to realize the futility of it (though he hasn't realized much else hehe). I just thought that maybe at the end he would have said, "Damn it, THAT I love you!" or something. But maybe he said it that way to just burst it out and scare Doumeki away?

Anyway, hot job once again, and I'm so interested in reading the next chapter that I keep mistyping, which is making me stay longer to write this, which is irritating me! So on to the next bloody freaking chapter!

-Kayura

Ahaha! And the best part about this is, Watanuki doesn't even think to LIE! Ahahahaha!

Oh, and just to tell you (since I've left shitloads of reviews and have yet to say this), the idea for this story is once again incredible. I know I've used that word a lot, but it seems the most fitting. Hearts to you!

-Kayura

"Beebopa doopa dee!"

...What?

^_^ Ahaha! If the story wasn't good enough, you left lulz at the bottom! I spent a number of seconds just trying to sound it out in my head. Is it a code or did you just have nothing to say? ?_?

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Yeah, that's supposed to be a peace sign. I wonder if anything was even shown for it?

Oh, well. Peace sign to you! *throws*

Ahahaha! Ninja fail much?

On to the next chapter!

Bwahaha. Yes. Steal it back. That couldn't possibly have any ramifications involved. ^_^ Hehehe.

Oh, and the line: "Watanuki made a face to indicate that this option would occupy the same level of hell as having his fingernails pried off while watching the twins perform teletubbies scripts."

Well, at least one would distract from the other. ^_^ Ne? See? Optimism has its place. Hehe.

Loves it! Already favorited both it and you.

-Kayura

The Stupid Laws of Physics line was absolutely perfect. I bust a gut laughing at that one, too. :P

The in-character stuff is incredible. I saw it in your other story, too - you have the ability to keep both of these guys in their original personalities while you play out your own story. ^_^

Ahahahaha! Resembled a clarinet! Ahahaha! It's so true!

^_^ Hearts2U.

-Kayura

This story was made of awesome. I loved it^^

Hello!^^

...Wow. The whole story was very sweet...^^ I love Dômeki, but Watanuki'reactions to everything are truly priceless! It's amazing how you respected their characters... (and Yûko's, too! :D)

Thank you for such a lovely story!!


Maeve (a stray French reader xD)

Very cute :)

I-I think this story made me fall in love with a complete stranger... such as yourself. Never stop writing.

^_^

That was so freaking cute. I enjoyed it very much.

*dramatic music plays*

He finally said it! Go, Watanuki, go!