good story. took me forever to read. i thaught kaiba was gonna stay a meanie. be right. was good. =]

very good story. happy holidays!

great story and i really enjoy reading it. Got to go. See yeah soon.

Well, Seto may not ever be a fan of Christmas but maybe he can find some joy in his brothers happiness.
Great story.

I knew it would take something with Mokuba to make him see what he's doing.
I hope this will make him change. Good story.

Hey, it's me. I'm trying to figure this out, cuz I don't understand. I've noticed that the chapters on my end seem more editted than the ones being submitted. Why are some things that I've done not coming into this sight?

An example in this chapter is the part where he remembers Xmas past saying, 'you can't escape your past'. That was italicized, and yet it didn't come out as so in your chapter. I know that ffnet allows italics, which is why I'm confused. Maybe the transfer back from my machine to yours isn't coming out entirely correct? Did that scene come italicized when you got it, or didn't it?

Clarity

wow talk about intense i can only picture what is going on inside Seto head. I wonder how this is going to end add more as soon as you can.

yay! please update, i want to read more :D great job btw.

Update soon!

Poor Seto, can't he see how he's hurting his brother? The only thing that will get to him is if it is Mokuba who is threatened.
Bob is very poor. Seto must not have paid him much.
I hope Kaiba changes.
Good chapter.

great update and i cant wait to see how seto is going to change.

Update soon! But first . . . will the last chapter be on Christmas? That would be nice.

I almost feel sorry for him. He needs to learn this lesson though. Good chapter.

Hey, it's me again. I really like where this is going and if you don't mind suggestions I'd like to make one for when the ghost of Christmas Future comes to visit: Have the gravestone's death date be like five years down the road, and try to have it explained as to why Seto met such an early demise. Just a thought, but whatever you decide please keep it up.

yey we get to see seto when he was younger. I love this update and i love how the weights fell on Gozaburo. Keep up the good work and update soon.