Nicely, nicely done. It flows well, and really makes me want to read more about F'ren and Rahnis. Nice also to find a goldrider who isn't devastatingly beautiful, but is intelligent and clever. I would really like to see you turn this into a story about the size of DRAGON DAYS, but I also know this is a lot to ask of a writer. I will content myself with reading the one-shots, I guess. ::sigh::

This is wonderfully written. The writing just flows naturally. I hope you continue with it.

This is a very interesting story - please continue!!

Shoot, now I REALLY want to see the outcome of Kiath's flight...
Wonderful piece, I'll have to go hunt down the prequel now. I know I've read it before, but I don't think I ever reviewed it.

Hey , that was Terrific

I'm new at ff, but it was as in depth and intriging as an original.

Didn't read the original, but will look for it now.

Well done.

This is ONLY going to be a onshot? Shards. How about a two-shot? PLEASE? *big grin*