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| Morgan5318 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseNicely, nicely done. It flows well, and really makes me want to read more about F'ren and Rahnis. Nice also to find a goldrider who isn't devastatingly beautiful, but is intelligent and clever. I would really like to see you turn this into a story about the size of DRAGON DAYS, but I also know this is a lot to ask of a writer. I will content myself with reading the one-shots, I guess. ::sigh:: |
| so'mi 2007-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is wonderfully written. The writing just flows naturally. I hope you continue with it. |
| GinaLee 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very interesting story - please continue!! |
| Kitsuneko 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseShoot, now I REALLY want to see the outcome of Kiath's flight... Wonderful piece, I'll have to go hunt down the prequel now. I know I've read it before, but I don't think I ever reviewed it. |
| Rimmersworld 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseHey , that was Terrific I'm new at ff, but it was as in depth and intriging as an original. Didn't read the original, but will look for it now. Well done. |
| Kinkin 2006-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is ONLY going to be a onshot? Shards. How about a two-shot? PLEASE? *big grin* |